Battle Rules:
10 2 15 lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
u spit first

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-04-04 at 03:09 PM

Must drop verse in 25 minutes after check in.

LoDown has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-04-04 02:11 PM.

ya weak azz says ya want a battle
take ya ass down south an play with cattle
or how bout qureerin some sheep
then ya can play like your Lil Bo Peep
better back off before I put ya ta sleep
then burie ya azz in words 6 feet deep
cause Im a lyrical rhyme genarator
for cold azz shits in the refridgeator
your like a preschooler ya need a narrateor
where did ya azz get ya wack azz skill
must found that shit outside Goodwill
Yo I think I seen ya azz on Dr Phil
wasn't ya the one ya mom was trin ta kill
go get ya dumb azz a job at WalMart
maybe ya can battle that old fart... the one at the door that gives ya a cart

Da Prodigy has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-04-04 02:22 PM.

yo/this guy aint uh newbe....rapverse is what he claim...
he got served so many times he changed his user name...

dude still thinkin about what 2 write down..
cuz his bars are like socks..when used 2 much there never found....

he steals ryhmes from others...he has no flow of his own...
when beatin he needs uh life line so he uses his phone....

this loser stay gettin losses...so he beta change his career...
he's gets hit wit so many punchlines he wears wrestling gear..

he might as well take up porno..
cuz when he gets beat he gets mad...
his tongue stay in the pussy like maxi pads

uppin......

ok uppin it for votes.....so we can see who the winner is...thanks

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VOTE IN MY BATTLES...PLEASE I'll return the favor

guess noone wants to vote on this one here...come on vote on this one ...Peace

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VOTE IN MY BATTLES...PLEASE I'll return the favor

uppin for votes.....I'll repay the favor......so let see some votes up in here

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VOTE IN MY BATTLES...PLEASE I'll return the favor

Voted For: Da Prodigy

well, neither of you had personals, which are important in battle raps, otherwise, who knows if you just wrote that waitin for someone to come at you wit a challenge. otherwise tho, prodigy had some good punches. it was hard to really feel lodowns lines which made prodigy's stick out more to me.

return tha favor
one more vote for me to close this battle
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=139783
i need one more vote for me to close this battle too
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...97&page=2&pp=15

Voted For: Da Prodigy

you got this but your verse was weak but definately had better punches then the other verse,the 3 line closer could've been left out,n it still would've been the same outcome..lodown your spits were too simple n your punchwere weak your closer was your best line n it dint flow right,,elevate....
im gonna break it down...

SC
Sick Lines will make your eye sight blurry like it was the 4th of July
his boi said he wasn't gay..he replied, "Now That's A Damn Lie"
^^ok.punch....6/10
Claims his blessed lines are a "head" then i'll nail him in his Holy "temple"
Your lines are far from sickness..wack and Kronuz seem to resemble
^^good wordplay..i liked this..7/10
Why'd u capitalize da "N" in ur name? oh ya dats right, ur worth Nothing
dese bars'll put more black dots in ur structure then Chocolate chip muffins
^^nice setup,but i was'nt feelin the 2nd line..6/10
Kronuz is definitely not "straight", Just like his status...He's "off line"
Lines Blast naepalms-n-Molotolves, have u runnin, steppin on land mines
^^nice vocab..7/10
Kids got lotta balls to challenge me,Leave Kro-Nuz..With No-Nutz
Treat lines like a vaccum..stick it inside you...And Blow-Gutz
^^ok closer...7/10

state ya verse seemed kinda rushed did'nt have great personals or mad wordplay bout an average drop,still good..33/50

kronuz
If Ya Pic Was Ya Background Only Way I Fear Ya Verse
And when You Need The "Cross" Look In The Mirror First (His Pic)
^^nice personal,good opener..8/10
Ya Verse And Vomit Got Alot In Common They Both Vile
N He gotta Grill Like "Proof" Thats Why He Dont Smile
^^was'nt feelin this..filler..4/10
Im Grim, Ill Take The Win Easily,And You'll Die Just A Fake
And Him Beatin Me Is Like His Chances Of Both Eyes Looken Straight!
^^funny shit..good personal..7/10 pushed rhyme
This Dudes Not Nicer, In This Division His Rhymes Soft
And Ya "User Title" Like Ya "Vision" One "Eye" Off (HiS User Title And His Eye)
^^personal..8/10
Ill Be Fair N Honest, This Aint A Threat I Bare A Promise
State's Chances Agianst Me Are Like Him In A Staring Contest! (Peep His Pic)lol
^^good closer...7/10..pushed rhyme...overall..34/50

overall you had better personals but lost ground on your rhyme scheme,nice personal punches though,nice drop..

overall i had ta break this down n give it 2 kronuz cause of the personals it was close and was a pretty good battle, props ta both ,...please return the favour........
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=139794
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=139167
topical:200 posts

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left...2 many herbs

ahh shit,that was the battle i just voted on jus ignore it..srry..i forgot about that....
still hit up those links n vote though......^^^^

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left...2 many herbs

Voted For: Da Prodigy

Not breakin this down line by line...havent had to do that with many fights lately

LoDown-What can i say? You suck...weak punches..wack structure n flow..no personals...no wordplay..no multis...you need to elevate badly

Da Prodigy-Not the worst i've ever heard by no means...but nothing to brag about....not many good punches...structure was decent with an ok flow..you won this because you had better punches..structure...well everything

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Voted For: Da Prodigy

gotta give this to Da Prod over harder punches....you had nice wordplay, mettas....nice structure too....changing the username is played...but you still won

LoDown....you too basic, i think you got your user name from that old WWF Tag Team Group of D-Lo Brown and some other dude...HAHA....you were ok....you had a nice structure....decent punches and everything....but Da Prod just hit ya harder

v/ Da Prod

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