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08-24-04, 05:56 PM | #1 | |||||
Banned: Cheating
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"A Love Story" [Hot Shit][rate]
IP: 3240 794D
"A Love Story"
well it started, a while back, was on the phone with my woman/ and we was goin thru some issues, now I felt her anger coming/ words exchanged without thought,our feelings held no regrets/ she said it was over, and that she never wanted to see me again/ so with anger, I grabbed a gun,then hung up the phone and left/ I couldn't believe the woman that I loved had me contemplating death/ I started down the steps, the pistol gripped tightly between my fingers/ "yo this bitch left me, man...I cant FUCKING BELIEVE THIS!!!/ got in the car, revin the engine with the stereo loud/ confused as fuck, my head feels like a merry-go-round/ tryin' to remain calm, but cant, my heart was now black as coal/ my ass was alone, cold, and with nowhere to go/ I felt so different, because I knew I was by myself/ drivin' solo thinking, "I wonder what it's like in hell?"/ my eyes started to swell, I just couldn't hold back the tears/ I could'nt believe that I had just wasted 'bout three years/ the next morning arrived, still mad, ready to die/ pulled the car over to the side, sighed, layed down and cryed/ thought about our past together, the nasty weather, and our future/ and now I feel like a loser, because I fucked up enough to lose her/ I sat wondering, if she was feeling the same pain as me/ but its plain to see, that love is more than a game to me/ I must be insane, to have put her thru all of that pain and strife/ damn man, I've made the biggest damn mistake of my life/ I took her for granite, took advantage, and then was abandoned/ damnit, I was stupid to lose something that I truly loved and cherished/ we had a future ahead of us, to get married, and start a family's life/ I always swore to her that with me, shit was guarenteed right/ but now hope is lost, I cant go crawling back/ cuz I'd fall back on my back, then come crawling right back/ I feel I just might crack, I'm trapped, I'll never be free/ I've got nuthin left in this world, cuz that gurl, was everything/ |
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08-24-04, 06:15 PM | #2 | |||||
Banned: Cheating
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IP: 3240 794D
yo come on people!!! uppin for feed back on this bitch!!!!
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08-24-04, 06:21 PM | #3 | |||||||||
Flyweight
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IP: 80E9 05F4
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LOL Dang, y'all SERIOUS 'bout people respondin' to y'alls stuff on here, huh? This' like the 5th thread I done' seen where the poster was like,"MAW EFFA, RESPOND TO MY MUTHA F'N THREAD. BREAK YOSELF, FOOLLLLL!" lol But anyway, I read your thread before you upped it and found it to be quite expressive. You do give off a psychotic-like vibe though and it started with: Quote:
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08-24-04, 08:11 PM | #4 | |||||
Banned: Cheating
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IP: 9EF2 7F0D
lmao...thanx gurl...still uppin for more feedback on this motherfucka!!!!!!!!!!!
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08-24-04, 08:15 PM | #5 | |||||
Light Weight
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IP: 1B6D EE58
nice
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08-24-04, 08:34 PM | #6 | ||||
Banned: Cheating
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IP: 68E4 45C0
tite shit dogg, im glad i know u in person
rep da STL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Last edited by LIL'DREW : 08-24-04 at 08:34 PM. Reason: none |
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08-24-04, 09:09 PM | #7 | |||||
Banned: Cheating
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IP: 3240 794D
lmao....uppin...stay reppin that 314 playa
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08-25-04, 08:04 PM | #8 | ||||
Banned: Cheating
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IP: 68E4 45C0
hell yeah!!!!
-314- fo life |
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