This the type of shit you couldn't get by askin thugs,
They wouldnt know you gotta wear a mask n gloves,
Yo why you readin this bro? I musta missed ya clearance,
Nervousness SHOULD result in this kids dissapearance,
Dont let them get away thinkin your a fuckin silly guy,
Let em think they have a chance so they'll really try,
Then into they head goes the fuckin icicle smooth and deep,
Ill give you the chance too pay for ya life ta prove ya cheap,
This is the song that can help you out or give you vivid images,
Like beatin ya fuckin head long enough to give it hemridges,
Keep em alive so they can learn to let the pain manage,
Cause you cant manage the pain wit ya brain damage,
Cut the body into parts untill each piece farts a battle beat,
People have been seen eatin em like plates a cattle meat,
Death comes naturally if you look at the fuckin trigger n pull it,
Now who the fuck is bigger I say as he connects wit ma bullet,
Its a big picture bein made out of a scribble of thick mixtures,
Askin why I kill is like askin why I have such sick scriptures,

Damn.


This is a pre-written I posted on another rap site and it got great reviews, so Im here now too see what kinda feedback you guys give.

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