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01-05-05, 02:48 PM
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The Epitome Of Greatness
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My Love Is The Realest......
IP: 0825 899A
aiight this is for my birl daniella... just wrote it while talking on the phone to her took 15 minutes check it out.....
youre asking, if the passion, is gonna always be there and i wanna love you forever but im always to scared I wanna kiss and hold you, console you, and need you but my problems, i cant solve em, and i need to eat too im getting alot from this relationship, but u got nothing and baby i know im frontin, so i gotta do something to keep you lovin me, huggin me, forever and always i opened the door to your heart, but im stuck in the hallways in all ways, i want to show you how much i really care youre my queen, but i mean, i really wanna be there i really dont wanna be scared, but thats my only option so im thinking, while sleeping, turning and tossing i love you with these words, i love you with my speech i love you from mount everest down to a river creek i love you from the grand canyon up to las vegas i love you unconditionally and im not afraid to say it Im not afraid to scream it, and im not afraid to feel it All you gotta know is that my love is the realest loving you is easy, but keeping you with me is hard forever youll have my heart, please dont leave it scarred it needs you as much as i do, even if i dont show it trust me, im touchy, i love you and i know it you need to know it to, thats something you have to do because a world without you, is a world that is not true this emotion and burden is beginning to break me down And when you tell me i fucked up it makes me frown because i know what i did, and i know it was wrong so i wanna show you how much i love you in this song ill scream it out loud, whenever youre feeling unloved and ill whisper it in your ear anytime... just because i love you with these words, i love you with my speech i love you from mount everest down to a river creek i love you from the grand canyon up to las vegas i love you unconditionally and im not afraid to say it Im not afraid to scream it, and im not afraid to feel it All you gotta know, is that my love is the realest
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01-05-05, 10:15 PM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: 8A1A D0A3
that was a hot as poem
it would sound good as audio |
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01-10-05, 08:06 PM
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IP: 74E2 4E7B
nice poem........
i was feeling these lines the most..  i love you with these words, i love you with my speech i love you from mount everest down to a river creek i love you from the grand canyon up to las vegas i love you unconditionally and im not afraid to say it some people don't know the difference between a poem and a topical.. you did a really good job on this.. keep droppin them like it's hot aight.. 
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01-10-05, 08:23 PM
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C.hristopher S.ean D.abatos
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IP: 8D5B 2407
Wow man, this is a really good poem, it may look like a topical, but really is a poem man.. much props
 , I now think ur better then me .. I loved everything, the creek, vegas, it was all very creative man, much props.. 9/10
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