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Old 06-30-04, 02:06 PM   #1
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Apotheosis(0-0) vs. Premanition(0-0)

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battles go up sunday night around 10:00 pm western
check in on Tuesday
verses due on JULY 7wedsday
votes due by the next saturday
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no freeposting more then three times your dq'd
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up your battle more than three times in a row your dq'd
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Old 06-30-04, 03:01 PM   #2
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In.......16 lines?
 
Old 07-01-04, 12:43 PM   #3
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in...........
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Old 07-06-04, 02:44 PM   #4
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I’ll greet this clown w/ a beat down, to turn his cranium red,
While he drops dope verses. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . to use wack ones instead.
Both UK heads, except YOUR intelligence is absent,
B’coz u pride British hip hop. . .but U do it in a US accent.
Baring factors of wackness, plus our crew think ur useless,
Coz you havent even elevated . . . even the search engine proves this.
Audios man of the moment? Afraid I beg to differ,
But no doubt all eyes are on U. . .tonight. . .by your babysitter.
Split ya scriptures, then easily rake up the votes,
Due to fact ur rhymes aren’t just the butt. . . . .
. . . . . . . . . . . their the entire body of all jokes.
This bloke is a pauper, his hometown isn’t rich,
& the homo wud get a life. . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . if only it wasn’t a bitch.
Ya text is like pensioners, it stinks. . .its nasty. . .& old,
Ill save. . .print. . .and tear ur shit. . .coz im known 2 break the mould.
My desire is always cold, Ur audios sound nasty & scabby,
& the only way you will be an ICON is to act like my avvy.
 
Old 07-06-04, 07:08 PM   #5
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u neva hesistate to exasperate hate on others.........
same country....scared, u migrate under covers........
got sex on the mind.....i simulate under ya mothers....
brother u diss on me but you yet to record audio......
'shadow edge'd u to txt leader..........................
...............now u more pissed than luigi at mario......
with plenty of vowels i'll beat harold with ease.........
'poetry in motion?'...
...avatar on its knees beggin for constanants please....
u have 'no money' to eat or drink...man ya pockets ain't deep...
n now u started this beef wiv me, u can't 'afford' to sleep....
i put u through excruciating pain.....beta prepare a new name...
and change it again....cos i just beat u by KO n txt is ur game....
jus another fag on 'u-channel' thinkin he made it big...(uk channel = nobodies)
but only thing in the above worth quotin is the comment in ur sig.....


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Old 07-07-04, 08:44 AM   #6
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Apo- all around a solid verse...you had some strong and witty punches
your verse flowed well


Baring factors of wackness, plus our crew think ur useless,
Coz you havent even elevated . . . even the search engine proves this.
Ouch...Personal..LOL

My desire is always cold, Ur audios sound nasty & scabby,
& the only way you will be an ICON is to act like my avvy.
LOOOOL....nice bar.

like i said before a solid battle verse..

overall 8/10

Prem- hmmmmm....i wasnt feelin your flow at all dogg...some lines were
just wack...


brother u diss on me but you yet to record audio......
'shadow edge'd u to txt leader..........................
...............now u more pissed than luigi at mario......
OOOK....this line could of been better

u have 'no money' to eat or drink...man ya pockets ain't deep...
n now u started this beef wiv me, u can't 'afford' to sleep....
no...dogg this is a text battle that shit would sound a lot better on audio not text

a Mediocre verse...i just wasnt feelin it...

overall 6.5/10

vote-apo
no hate just my opinon..

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Old 07-07-04, 10:11 PM   #7
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uppin............................................. .
 
Old 07-08-04, 12:20 PM   #8
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Old 07-10-04, 11:40 AM   #9
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Old 07-10-04, 08:31 PM   #10
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ok, this was a pretty tight battle, but I think Apotho took this one.

Prem, yo verse was aiight. You had decent punches, but none hit that hard. They were aiight. Your flow was pretty ggood but it went fof in places. Overall, it was a pretty decent verse.

Apotho, you had a very good verse. You had a lot of good punches. That hit hard and everything. Tight shit. You also had some real good flow too. Overall, tight verse.

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Old 07-11-04, 04:03 PM   #11
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^thanks. 2-0
 
Old 07-11-04, 05:07 PM   #12
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I Hate Fam Battles..lol But both came out sick...............

Prem:

Verse was good. Punches were aight, Some were forced some hit overall they were aight. I loved yo flow, personals were felt but could have used more creativity on it. Overall, Good drop.

Apo:

U good verse, Punches were complex good stuff.They werent forced they hit. You had nice flow it was actually lil betta then prem, betta personals. Overall good verse


V/: Ap

Because: He had more betta overall verse.
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Old 07-12-04, 12:13 PM   #13
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Opener

I’ll greet this clown w/ a beat down, to turn his cranium red,
While he drops dope verses. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . to use wack ones instead.

9.7/10

u neva hesistate to exasperate hate on others.........
same country....scared, u migrate under covers........

8/10

Open/Apo

Bestline

Baring factors of wackness, plus our crew think ur useless,
Coz you havent even elevated . . . even the search engine proves this.

10/10

brother u diss on me but you yet to record audio......
'shadow edge'd u to txt leader..........................
...............now u more pissed than luigi at mario......

8/10

Bestline/apo

Closer

My desire is always cold, Ur audios sound nasty & scabby,
& the only way you will be an ICON is to act like my avvy.

9/10

jus another fag on 'u-channel' thinkin he made it big...(uk channel = nobodies)
but only thing in the above worth quotin is the comment in ur sig.....

9/10

closer/both

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