Battle Rules:

16 no higher no lower
No resicling
No Biting
And its a freestyle right now go!

Minimum posts to vote: 30

Check in by: 09-01-04 at 03:41 AM

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NoMercy has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-29-04 03:41 AM.

Tha Flash has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-29-04 03:41 AM.

Now I Didn't Wanna Have To Put Ya Ass On Blast,
But My Shit Is Like Tear Gas You'll Need A Gas Mask//
It'll Take A Few Seconds For Me To Leave U Slumped In The Grass,
I Crack Ya Skull Open An Leave It Scattered On The Ground Like Glass//
I Roll With Pump But U Don't See Cause It's Stuffed In The Back,
An I Ain't An Athlete But I'll Be Running Ya Ass//
I'm A Carolina Native A Level 5 Tornado,
I'll Drop More Bombs On U Like Bush And N.a.t.o//
And I'll Rock U Nigga You'll Behind My Bars Just Like Yayo//
I'll Put U Where The Sun Don't Shyne,
And I Don't Mean The One In The Sky I Mean The One With The Nine//
Cause When U Step In My Hood They'll Be More Hands Pointing Then The Ones That Tell Time,
I'm Like A Train And U Ain't Gonna Disrail My Rail Line//
I Slaughter Ya Ass And Get Away With No Jail Time,
Ya Lyrics Should Be Destroyed Like A Failed Experiment//
And My Heater Will Leave U In The Dirt Like An Ancient Pyramid,
So Nigga Clean Ya Ears Out Cause I Hope Ya Hearing This//
Cause I Ain't Gonna Repeat Myself,
I'll Leave Ya Brain On The Ground Looking Like Chesse When It Melts//
And U Scheming For Help U Need A New Writer,
But It's To Late Cause I'll Have Ya Ass Retire Like J.r. Rider//
But While Fed Ex Packages Mail,
I'm Leaving Dots On Ya Ass As If U Was Practicing Brail//
So Nigga Don't Test My Skills,
I Ain't Next President But I Will Be On The Next Hundred Dollar Bill//
And Take This Like The Last Battle I Won't Show No Mercy,
Even An Ancient Voodoo Witch Couldn't Curse Me//
Nigga U Can't Be Serious,
I Thought After Losing The First Time You'd Realize Your Delerious//
And U Can't Handle My Rhymes,
So Go Back To Sleep Cause It's Almost Past Ya Nap Time//

i might of came outta the lockness/
but still in my verses some shit need to process/.
but maybe "Flash" needs to think, and take a geuss/
of who hes battlen cuz ill win cuz i got stonger finess/.
drop you off maybe, but im sure you wouldent/
win because im sure i would take you down and you couldent/.
and shouldent hafe to front me down dont need to make you frown/
yer a big fuckin blood hound, but ill just hafe to drop you on the ground/.
you askin me questions how i do it, i told you to shut up/
fuck you, you think your good fuck you aint the one rapin like kurupt/.
i just need some more time to prosess in the game/
shut up yer lame, just no theres to much stress here/.
now you got to leave to court and you askin for to much recess/
what you fat need to eat i aint impressed, man, i got more sucess/.
your less then me, now i feed you to many punches you done in two or three/
he ask who we be cant he see that im nockin you down in three/.

Uppin For Votes People, I'll Return The Favor And I Think No Mercy Will To

Just To Let Ya Know This Was A Rematch, So Vote Up On This

Uppin For Votes, Ya Need To Hop On This And Start Voting

ya vote on this ok but remember give me credit im young still learnin but ya hit us up

uppin for votes, vote up on this rematch and the original one to

Voted For: Tha Flash

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punches=flash
metas=flash
multis-=flash
/v/=flash

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DUn duN dUn.......

uppin for votes people, let's go, i'll return the favor

Voted For: Tha Flash

Tha Flash
dont put the /s at the end of ur lines.. structure is decent.. flow falls off a little.. u had some multis.. wordplay was pretty good.. some of ur punches connected.. no good personals..

NoMercy
dont put the /s at the end of ur lines.. structure is ok.. flow falls off.. no multis.. wordplay was decent.. a few of ur punches connected.. attempted personals, but they didnt connect..

Overall
Both had an ok structure.. both had an average flow.. neither had good personals.. Tha Flash had more multis.. better wordplay, and more connecting punches.. so basing off of that.. Tha Flash gets my vote..

VOTE - THA FLASH

Voted For: NoMercy

nice man i like your flow u hit him with recess sucess

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