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01-19-06, 11:13 PM | #1 | |||
New to RV
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Allow Me To Introduce Myself
IP: 9775 8132
Aligned to newbies. I know you thinking I’m no better
Yall Simple minds aint hard to read unlike Rosetta The Stone, Mo clever yet you seem to mistook That on any board you cant compare a queen to the rooks Speak against me I’ll attack-yer vernacular, this aint basics With statements breaking ya language in 8 places Changes mood, my rhymes prelude they shape shifts The way I surprise, eyebrows move, I make face lifts Refined may game quick so I’m able to say this. I Renovated my room for improvement and made Space-ships Switch it up … Rozetta uh… no better Hoes, not stepping to Stone you know better Aint no pulling me down, I’m no lever Strong hands making you fold so don’t bet her So fresh.. And just so clever I reign heavy on any land, I’m so weather Rozetta Stone better than your average savage As I’m handling hammers like judge Mathis Flow, oh so precise, cutting on edge You need shape ups ya cuts are just jagged Bastards… with this I’ll retort You Kids stand weak, needing child support Wilder force than Anakin, torch you mannequins No dick to ride so you just band wagoning Get ya dome rocked I’m all about fame U rugs get shitted this bitch isn’t house trained Tailored styling to your liking elevation has heightened Since I link words together better than a hyphen http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2624685 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=219719 |
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01-20-06, 01:15 AM | #2 | |||||
in your system
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IP: 9E2F CDE8
The Stone, Mo clever yet you seem to mistook
That on any board you cant compare a queen to the rooks Tailored styling to your liking elevation has heightened Since I link words together better than a hyphen i liked those lines the best, this was okay, some stuff was played, but overall, it was creative, and fresh, better than most cats dropping in here, so, props to that.....you have a nice style, so, work with it, i guess, keep up
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01-20-06, 01:26 AM | #3 | |||||||
Oye...Tu Sabes..!!
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IP: F1FC 4749
This Was Ok, Nothing Above Average.....The Lines Weren't Constructed To Amaze The Reader And The Rhyming Was Too Basic....6-10
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01-20-06, 05:44 AM | #4 | |||||
Black Poet
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IP: 7BC4 5A05
So ma nice intro welcome to RV again,...
Liked this bar !! So fresh.. And just so clever I reign heavy on any land, I’m so weather Nice spit, alright flow nice vocab,,... really decent verse. Stay up 1~ |
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01-20-06, 09:50 AM | #5 | ||||
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IP: 31C2 62EB
This was a pretty decent drop..some bars were really creative and had some nice punchlines..others were just played,Your structure was decent..And you have a pretty creative style..keep it up.
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01-20-06, 12:40 PM | #6 | |||
New to RV
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IP: 9775 8132
thanx yall. this is mos def not my best shit. i wrote this in about 9 mins
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01-20-06, 06:23 PM | #7 | |||
New to RV
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IP: 9775 8132
bump bump bump like b2k
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01-20-06, 06:42 PM | #8 | ||||
Middle Weight
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IP: 49FB B804
this was very hard to read... mostly cuz that avy is so annoying lol
neways.... ok drop... my fav lines are 'The Stone, Mo clever yet you seem to mistook That on any board you cant compare a queen to the rooks' good multis, lyrics are solid for the most part, you want to avoid corny/played wordplay (reign/weather), braggin verses have a tendency to get borin n repetitive, but u keep this one alive with some fresh lines rtf on my om, link in sig |
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01-21-06, 12:39 AM | #9 | |||
Dope Like Whoa
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IP: FA36 AB97
This drop surprised me. I wasn't expecting to see something like this from somebody new to the board, but I must say, I was pleasently surprised. You had some played comcepts thrown around in there, but overall this was a solid introductory track. Multies were good, and you stayed consistent. I like that. I also like long walks on the beach, and a warm sandwich.
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01-21-06, 12:58 AM | #10 | |||
New to RV
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IP: 9775 8132
thabx yall i got other shit for yall to peep
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01-21-06, 01:10 AM | #11 | |||
Dope Like Whoa
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IP: FA36 AB97
You should like...Post it an shit.
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01-21-06, 11:58 AM | #12 | |||
New to RV
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IP: 9775 8132
I will dont worry. i do have a life outside of the net so typing up my shit is not my 1st priority
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01-21-06, 12:52 PM | #13 | ||||
leave you rest'n pz's
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IP: A0F2 0238
i like how you can switch up your style..
the verse was decent .. much better then alot of newbs ive read from
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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts what the fuck, was you high..? did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...! . . fake fucks..move on...! |
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01-21-06, 01:38 PM | #14 | |||||||
Light Weight
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IP: 2029 97B3
pretty good for an rv female...shit composed of mainly us dudes and shit cuz most the chicks jus post they pics in member mugshots for attention then bounce but n e ways nice piece liked the wordplay and vocab was basic but flow n structure was on point 4 the most part liked the punches u used keep ma and continue posting peace...btw rtf on my new shit titled new shit ty...p.s. im the most hated next 2 reign because rv seems 2 think im a bitch so if u get n e free post dissin me in here you kno why...one word haters! 1
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01-21-06, 01:57 PM | #15 | |||||||
The Alien Toung
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IP: A6CC 8109
my name is hov !!!!
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