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05-23-05, 09:47 PM | #1 | ||||
Witness, 4 God, 4-Ever
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One Way or the Other
IP: 0D35 C470
The temptations runnin’ rampant
how could this have happened everything’ was goin’ great but someone wants to change my fate I know to go with One and not the other One is sayin’ love, the other hate my brother everything goin’ on is completely confusin’ goin’ ‘round in my head like some kind of illusion I know its One was or the other His was, no other fightin’ this thing is completely drainin’ me but if I quit, souls are lost for eternity it’s hard to believe one person can make a difference to be kept in remembrance for all the things that were done but, then, I remember the Son the decision shouldn’t be a bother its either One way or the other One way or the other follow Satan or my Father knowin’ what to do havin’ Christ pull me through all the pains, struggles, and strife I will follow the Way, Truth, and Life The trials of this life are floodin’ my mind always comin’ at me all the time to know what to do His word I must go through to do what is right always puttin’ up a fight to go with One and not the other with the One, my sins were covered not wantin’ to break His commandments after sayin’ that I truly repent givin’ in is somethin’ that will happen and when it does, my heart it will dampin’ I want His way not the other doin’ things for my Heavenly Father but with everything comin’ at me the future good is hard to see don’t know, I feel like I’m bein’ smothered but it’s either One way or the other One way or the other follow Satan or my Father knowin’ what to do havin’ Christ pull me through all the pains, struggles, and strife I will follow the Way, Truth, and Life Will there ever be an end I pray and ask my dearest friend to ease the pain and strife to help me through this life leading me, guiding me helping me walk righteously followin’ the One and not the other not wantin’ to go no further along the wide road that is corruptin’ my soul even when I stumble Lord, You won’t let me crumble You catch me when I fall You hear me when I call out of the two Lord, I choose You even though Satan, to me, will try to bother I choose You and not the other One way or the other follow Satan or my Father knowin’ what to do havin’ Christ pull me through all the pains, struggles, and strife I will follow the Way, Truth, and Life http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=191967
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i come from a time when you earned respect, for your rhyme and the way you made words connect, not the money that you made or the girls you sexed, a concept you obviously haven't heard of yet Mars Ill
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05-25-05, 01:17 PM | #2 | ||||
Witness, 4 God, 4-Ever
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IP: 65AC DEA5
uppin for some feedback
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i come from a time when you earned respect, for your rhyme and the way you made words connect, not the money that you made or the girls you sexed, a concept you obviously haven't heard of yet Mars Ill
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05-26-05, 01:07 AM | #3 | ||||
Witness, 4 God, 4-Ever
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IP: 5232 0FD1
still uppin....
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i come from a time when you earned respect, for your rhyme and the way you made words connect, not the money that you made or the girls you sexed, a concept you obviously haven't heard of yet Mars Ill
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05-26-05, 02:51 AM | #4 | |||
Skadoosh!
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IP: 477B D81A
this was good for a beginner
lines were a little short makin it sound rushed flow was good though, vocabs was basic, need to up that overall 5.5/10 |
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05-26-05, 06:49 PM | #5 | |||||
Flyweight
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IP: 2FD5 1A60
this was unique. your lines were short which added dimension to your verse. your vocab wasn't big which would also make it sound better on audio. flow was solid... n/m bad to say, try putting this on audio. imagery was alright...nothing special...keep it up
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...797#post2177797
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05-27-05, 12:16 AM | #6 | ||||
Witness, 4 God, 4-Ever
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IP: 55EA C1BB
thanks man, already one step ahead of you. its on my cd which should be out sometime this summer.
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i come from a time when you earned respect, for your rhyme and the way you made words connect, not the money that you made or the girls you sexed, a concept you obviously haven't heard of yet Mars Ill
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