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Old 02-16-04, 06:21 AM   #1
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New tune-Sweet turns sour

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Im English so dont expect my stuff to sound similair! Basically my girl cheated on me, and i hold grudges...UPPIN FOR FEEDBACK ON THIS...

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Old 02-16-04, 06:29 AM   #2
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Old 02-16-04, 09:19 AM   #3
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your delivery was weak. the flow was ight at times.. off and on here and there.

the hook was alright, nothing really too special.

wasn't feeling the beat.. but maybe it's just that i don't like organs.

decent drop.. work on your delivery more.
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Old 02-17-04, 08:31 PM   #4
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