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02-14-04, 07:12 PM | #1 | |||||||
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Battling Tendecies
IP: 8FF0 26B7
I bring these new bars, im the ghost writer so i brew stars
im black and i got you going wow like i used rob come on the board and everything is likely i pop-eyes cause when i spit in this game its hot and spicy too explizit in the brain to calm my temper knife me its like i play golf cause under my rocawear stays white t's now everybody talking bout life b but i'm here spitting out dirt blinding your eyes like light beams and im 8 long, hard and brain getting like night dreams and punches are useless against me like ya fight steam might scream, when i come at ya like the enemies sighted but its gonna take ten-ne-ssee(ten ta see) me like you challegened the titans you'll think its dead(out) wrong the way i damage your write(ins) but you like a dirty ass, your only future is getting wipeings who you bitting, bitch i told ya im hard like steel come at me but i only run with crews the size of wheels
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02-14-04, 07:36 PM | #2 | |||||||
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IP: 8FF0 26B7
uppin
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02-14-04, 09:52 PM | #3 | ||||
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Yo dat was pretty tight really the only thing wrong wit it was you didnt space your lines and some of them got a little hard to read as in i couldent tell what the rhymin words were and some vocab. here and there try to look at the alfebet .......but other than that on a scale of 1-10 ten bein jus straight up sick ide say proly bout a 6 1/2 witch isnt bad i have seen alot worse so just space your lines work on some vocab and you got the verse on grip!
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