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10-04-05, 10:16 PM | #1 | |||
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True Words
IP: 1ADC A69C
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^^Click on "True Words" beat: Arcane..."Better Days" Lyrics: All Q Theme: This is truth...like a purging for me...everything said here is true...the names...true...the accounts...true...My grandmother, Inez Crank, is my heart...she's my angel from God...and this track was written as if it wud be a conversation I wud have with her, confessing and reminiscing about things from my childhood...until the last few bars and its like IM lashing out...cursing...so I wudn't be talking to my grandma that way It's short...but as real as I've ever been on a track Holla 1 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=210607 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=210509 Last edited by Tha Q. : 10-04-05 at 10:20 PM. |
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10-04-05, 10:38 PM | #2 | ||||
Hell yeah
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IP: 9AFF 56BB
listening:
beat is dope, nice sampling, yeah nice choice, flow is mmm i dunno , the lyrics are really dope, u really love her huh i can see it man , just lil feed but dope track man .::.Speats.::. |
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10-04-05, 11:55 PM | #3 | |||
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IP: 2029 97B3
im liking the beat at first. the sample is real cool.
lyrically it was cool. got to learn about you gettin robbed and not fighting anyone. so that was cool i guess. your mic prescence was there. clear and loud. but not too loud. quality was decent. not too good but not too bad. your flow was definitely original. something kinda strange cause you would add more words and then it'd be less and then more. so it was original. |
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10-05-05, 05:50 AM | #4 | ||||
Flyweight
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IP: 5E35 AFD9
*listening*
beat's nice.... delivery is aight, i would say put more emotion into it. lyrics and word choice is pretty decent. some forced multis... but most of them were coo. the quality isn't up to snuff but it's still legit in my opinion. liked the ending, good shit man keep it up. you got potential return the favor man. http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=210622 |
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10-05-05, 06:43 AM | #5 | |||
OYD
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IP: 1ADC A69C
lyrics are 100% personal
I chose not to process my vocals too much preciate da feed |
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10-05-05, 06:45 AM | #6 | ||||||
Above Originality
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IP: D40E 67D5
yea this shit was ill homie nice man nice.....
ayo check out my OM called Drama Settas with One mic, Paul caine and Hitchcock....its dope boi!!!
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10-05-05, 06:54 AM | #7 | ||||
OYD
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IP: 1ADC A69C
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I wasn't "robbed"...I said he "robbed me" because he "fooled" with me meanin I was molested pssf |
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10-05-05, 07:22 PM | #8 | |||||||
Tha 1st member of S.W.A
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IP: 5350 A834
werd, i liked that shit holmes, werd
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10-06-05, 06:56 AM | #9 | |||
OYD
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IP: 1ADC A69C
^^^love ur feed nigga
haaaa uppin |
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10-06-05, 03:54 PM | #10 | |||||||
ILL GRAMMATIX... any other questions?
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IP: EF25 E8E6
first things first... booo for not making it longer... secondly, the real shyt is a lot better than the made up bullshyt that goes on in hip-hop so the connection is always there when ya coming from real experiences... 3 decent track but i felt ya coulda put more emotion into it... ya had some but i felt it wasn't sufficient for ya track... quality is decent as usual... a lil tweaking woulda helped but you explained that already so we'll leave it at that... cool track put way too short... if you want kats to listen to ya shyt and feel where ya coming from you should give them an earful and not tease ya audience and have them looking for more by the end...out
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10-06-05, 04:36 PM | #11 | ||||
Ike
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IP: 9A36 31F6
good shit man....
your flow at the beginning is a bit weird...but different...so i like it..... im feelin the real life experiences....always makes a song more fun to listen to and more meaningful.....lyrics are nice....delivery n presence is there.... not a bad track man...keep it up
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10-06-05, 10:13 PM | #12 | ||||
OYD
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IP: 1ADC A69C
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are u calling me a cock tease? haaa...I feel where ur coming from |
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10-07-05, 12:36 AM | #13 | ||||
Ike
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IP: 577C 1E7C
word Q...please RTF on Obvious Subliminals...........thanks
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10-07-05, 02:51 PM | #14 | ||||
Champion
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IP: 1824 E103
iiite listening now.....likin the beat..nice good feel to it, I see that ure tryin to have a lil variety in youre lyrics and ure flow and I like that, the lyrics are nice, maybe have more emotion with tracks like this, like I know this real jus flow real summin I gotta do to, delivery and presence very good...MAKE IT LONGER!!! this was very good, nice to hear this from you, I aint got school tomorow so I can holla atcha tonite ...I got a collab proposition for u...holla atchya boi..ill be on 10:30 pm my time and can you rtf to the track with me Iplicit and Status - no one comes close..
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