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Old 02-14-04, 03:56 PM   #1
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an audio verse to the many men instrumental... its for the studio... theres gonna be 2 other verses, by other crew members.....


As some of ya’ll know my flows are deadly like a venom
Heading sessions with the yakpak laughing teaching youth a lesson
Lyrically infecting… street connecting addressing all the stressing
Without confession… the 1E brethren ripping mic’s with presence
Flipping rhymes like felons, convalescing with every fucking mention
Try’na Strengthen, fetching hip hop try’na fucking lessen
Preconceptions… Cos British beats are tempting
Reinventing England’s domain, reigning flaming play’n games,
A new strain we’re testing with progression, what’s our aim, fame
Fortune, glory, what’s my name, Dev… so quit bitch messing
Count your blessings, don’t question, cos there’s wealth in health’s affection
And now’s the yakpak’s time for stretching…
Yes, dissecting and directing, slicing, looping up the seconds
To local preference with a pit yakka reference
Real intentions real incentives, stinging people with a sentence
Leave em sitting thinking… what’s the fucking message
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Old 02-14-04, 03:59 PM   #2
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Yes..this would be a great in audio~~~~I can see it's a bit different from your usual style...good job my very gay friend!
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Old 02-14-04, 04:18 PM   #3
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^^my philosophy is, you talk about it too much to be straight....lmao.....
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Old 02-14-04, 04:23 PM   #4
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it was alright worth the reading but far from hating heres my support and keep them coming
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Old 02-14-04, 06:12 PM   #5
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thnx uppin........
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Old 02-14-04, 07:14 PM   #6
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Yo nice flow homie , i liked the vocab, and complexity of it. It had a nice concept as well. You had some hot ass multis in there and it was a good flow.Spit flamez.
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Old 02-14-04, 07:17 PM   #7
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Yo alot of things seemed forced and alot of it did not make any sense at all but it was ok could have been better
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Old 02-15-04, 04:29 AM   #8
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none of it was forced foo.... cant you read.....
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Old 02-15-04, 05:05 AM   #9
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uhhh...it ain't really supposed to make sense...that's why it ain't got a damn title...asshole...lol...but anywayz...this was good...vocab was on point as usual...and I wanna hear the audio when it comez out...y'all British rapperz amuse me...lol...
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