AHHHHHH....srry 4 da mess ups BLAH
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no d/r hate votes
u spit 1st
no feed of

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yo when me n my crew comes to bust,
you can merely count ya men.... but you'll never sence us//(sensus)

Ya lyrics are labeled as shit...But i'll make em hott
as i blaze ya lips... you work on ya knees so much it's like someone stapled ya feet to ya hips//

this bitch is posting his verse second, just to say he last'ed...
watch this rap kid get his ass kicked and ripped like spandex on fat kids//

i'll forever win your needs, sin for free, while your on extacy,
just to show you how you get "in jour E's"//injuries

killachris couldent spit a verse dats even half decent /
hed be lucky if after this battle hes still breathin' /

I put heat to his "mid-section" and slowly burn him to ~ashes~ /
my spits have "sick-intentions" and coulden cure them wit ~patches~ /

im tellin you nigga is not a laughin matter~when my rhyme pattern~ implodes on u and leaves ya
privates scattered /

im sick with the words...vocab gets this fool twisted on da action verbs /

he'll leave out this thread screamin like a Horror Flick /
i'll stop his lips...when my Gun find a place to Store the Clips / (put bullets in his mouth)

LETS GET DA VOTES IN FOOLZ

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flow.......... N.R.O.
punches...........N.R.O
structure.......N.R.O
opening.............. N.R.O
closing......... N.R.O.
closing.......... N.R.O

new rap order easily took this battle

thanks rythm...but i need poll-votes...LETS GO PEEPZ VOTE UP ON THIS BTTLE...dont sleep on it

if ya vote here...i'll vote on yours !!! SO VOTE UP

go hit this up plz

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=89186

ps NRO took this far better punches.....the other cats a newb's....must be white....enough said

dont 4get 2 hit it up

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E C C O u 4got 2 poll-vote...!!!
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uppin again for all u lazy ass people who cant vote 4 shit....VOTE GOTDAMIT.......................................... .......................

uppin....
fuck you ecco talkin shit.... your a fuckin bitch... back your shit up... and battle me... 10 lines max due tonight by midnight cuz i got shit to do toay...

YA NIGGAZ NEED TO STOP SLEEPIN ON THIS...I VOTED ON LIKE 5 BTTLES BUT NOBODY VOTES HERE...DANM !
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opening...new rap order
closing...new rap order
flow...new rap order
punches... new rap order

overal... new rap order

N.R.O took thsi all the way, sorry kid but you need to elevate, you'll get better, just takes some practise thats all. N.R.O came out much stronger on every aspect, nice punches.