Alright New Rules..
8-20 LINE Maximum
Check Ins : TUESDAY
Verses By : THURSDAY
No Biting, D/R, Recycling of Any Kind..

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Checkedy check..........

eSs... ya 'AIM' is off from S.O.S to MS.N, (missin)
U slippin cant freestyle even ya breaths are written.
your a Nervous Wreck, u dont deserve respect,
the diss-connect so many times u gettin ya internet service checked.
serve ya neck leave ya head wit a permanent tilt,
then curve my text and let u determine tha skill.
learn to sit still before u get dropped~in~a~hearse,
stuff ya briefs to look hard, saw three~socks~in~ya~purse,
now u think u firing at me cause u took screen shots of my verse.
nigga copy~this u wouldnt win by 3 or 5 if u dropped ya verse on a floppy disk, (3.5)
ure a hoe, prolly got stocky hips,
late nite pleasure busy talkin to teens,
ya been murdered so much on RB u got permanent chalk on ya screen.
y u think when u threaten-kidz....they all laugh n smirk,
i mean come on homie, whos tha last person that SANTA-hurt?.
eSs a rapper????
nah this kids a scientist if i posted ur credentials my verse would be a silent diss.
eSs is tryin to say he's sick...but just got proved to be gay 'n shit,
Told him to put his money where his mouth is.......Stupid Fucker payed my dick.

Addlibb's Scared To Face Off and Lose,Altho Its Better To Gain
When I Have This Kid Seeing Doubles Like The Letters In His Name
Ya Destined To Lose,No Questions,I Proved im The Better Man
Only Thing Goin To War Wit Me Got U and ya Fam Was A Telegram
Aint No Miss Quotes Or Typos, Yea I Said It Right
I'll Leave Addlibb Right At Home When I Throw Him Off His "Poetic Heights"
A Chance To Win? Nah Libb Never Had The Thought
So eSs'll Just Take Half Ya Name and "Add" The Loss
I See We Battlin For LightWeight,Both Of Us R Miss Placed
I Should Be in HeavyWeight and well...nah ur in the Right Place
30 wins? i guess comp is laggin hear,and Im Facin The Softest
Funny Im Battling a 15 Year old With The Same Age as Losses
I'll Never Settle For 2nd Best,The Title Is What Im Pursuin
So Im Dissin This Fag So Bad His Own Sig'll Stop Movin

this was ill...here goes

addlibb

eSs... ya 'AIM' is off from S.O.S to MS.N, (missin)
U slippin cant freestyle even ya breaths are written.
your a Nervous Wreck, u dont deserve respect,
the diss-connect so many times u gettin ya internet service checked

^^good opener and a decent second bar

serve ya neck leave ya head wit a permanent tilt,
then curve my text and let u determine tha skill.
learn to sit still before u get dropped~in~a~hearse,
stuff ya briefs to look hard, saw three~socks~in~ya~purse
now u think u firing at me cause u took screen shots of my verse.

^^i wasnt really feeling this..

nigga copy~this u wouldnt win by 3 or 5 if u dropped ya verse on a floppy disk, (3.5)
ure a hoe, prolly got stocky hips,
late nite pleasure busy talkin to teens,
ya been murdered so much on RB u got permanent chalk on ya screen.

^^ill

y u think when u threaten-kidz....they all laugh n smirk,
i mean come on homie, whos tha last person that SANTA-hurt?.
eSs a rapper????

^^that was ight

nah this kids a scientist if i posted ur credentials my verse would be a silent diss.
eSs is tryin to say he's sick...but just got proved to be gay 'n shit,
Told him to put his money where his mouth is.......Stupid Fucker payed my dick.

^^ill. best part of this battle

E

Addlibb's Scared To Face Off and Lose,Altho Its Better To Gain
When I Have This Kid Seeing Doubles Like The Letters In His Name
Ya Destined To Lose,No Questions,I Proved im The Better Man
Only Thing Goin To War Wit Me Got U and ya Fam Was A Telegram

^^these both had potential but i dont feel that you pulled it off that well..

Aint No Miss Quotes Or Typos, Yea I Said It Right
I'll Leave Addlibb Right At Home When I Throw Him Off His "Poetic Heights"
A Chance To Win? Nah Libb Never Had The Thought
So eSs'll Just Take Half Ya Name and "Add" The Loss

^^ill...lol

I See We Battlin For LightWeight,Both Of Us R Miss Placed
I Should Be in HeavyWeight and well...nah ur in the Right Place

^ill

30 wins? i guess comp is laggin hear,and Im Facin The Softest
Funny Im Battling a 15 Year old With The Same Age as Losses

^decent

I'll Never Settle For 2nd Best,The Title Is What Im Pursuin
So Im Dissin This Fag So Bad His Own Sig'll Stop Movin

^^ill.

ok..you both started off slow and got better as the battle went on. besides a few bars add had a pretty good verse while E was persistant the whole way through...that being said my vote goes to Ess...

Thanx irrelivance...............

1-0 you

(and i'm 19 not 15 it even say's so in my profile)

yeh gotta go for essos on this sorry pound

the last line from addlib was funny as fuck....few other nice lines
but essos had more punches that connected so i gotta vote for him

this shit's seriously gettin slept on...vote