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06-17-03, 11:14 PM | #1 | ||||||
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Just Another Love Song
IP: FE8B 6CD9
This tantric tale leaves me stunned, my face is pale
The way it impales my heart with the strength of heated rails I’m not supposed to fail but in Love I can not win Being stretched in all directions loosing control of my own skin I take a blow to the chin with each hollow move I make The next day I awake to greet each one as a mistake I don’t want to say that its to late but time is never on my side Leaving my will a lost child just looking for a place to hide Wishing it could confide in someone who feels the same But I’m separated from the pack, I stand alone in my own game Where I seem to make the rules or the rules make me Expectations are to high so now I’m blinded from what I see To be or not to be was never a question I took thought to To be what? Maybe myself, at times I just forgot to This onslaught through and through, this self inflicted pain This place I want to be in just seems to go down the drain I just want to be the same, feel the same as others do For once in my life Id like these visions that I see to be true Fuck the planning stages love blackens and burns, rages Changing my outer shell as it seems to advance in stages The story in these pages that make up what I am Leave me thrown against the bindings just another of the damned Damned to be this worthless being, seeing only in my dreams Watching this whole world be destroyed, as it rips me by the seems These screams of desire transpire to dire heights Not only does love blind me but it darkens all other light Leaves my sight in shades of gray, cold thoughts infest my heart to stay Where I’m forced to wake up from sleep to suffer through another day This play a tragedy reflects my problems as they stay I can be deprived of love but my words wont go away this one was tough to do in audio i had to leave some words out but it still sounds ok BMUSE - Just another love song |
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06-17-03, 11:37 PM | #2 | ||||||
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IP: FE8B 6CD9
up
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06-17-03, 11:38 PM | #3 | ||||||
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IP: 2B23 543A
Nice.
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06-17-03, 11:44 PM | #4 | ||||||
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did u check out the audio?
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06-18-03, 12:50 AM | #5 | ||||||
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we have such a rowdy crowd tonight!
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06-18-03, 05:39 AM | #6 | ||||||
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Dang..I Loved The Flow Of This Text Piece...
A Deep Portrayal Executely Very Nicely Indeed... Unfortunetely I Can't Peep The Audio Yet, I'll Hit It Up In 5 Hours Or So... Great Work Though Bro |
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06-18-03, 05:58 PM | #7 | ||||||
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thanks bro
audio is hot trust |
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06-19-03, 03:17 AM | #8 | ||||||
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upin for love
or hate i guess haha |
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06-19-03, 03:28 AM | #9 | |||||||
shit is just too easy.
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Nice Shit Dawg...Checked Out The Audio Too..Even Sikker
Could You Return The Favor On "Untitled" And "What's The Difference ?"
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This is a dope sig. |
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06-19-03, 03:47 AM | #10 | ||||||
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IP: FE8B 6CD9
thanks bro
ill get to your stuff man no doubt |
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06-19-03, 04:30 AM | #11 | ||||||
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nice piece......good flow.....good plot.....everything was on......nice drop........
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06-19-03, 05:27 PM | #12 | ||||||
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thanks man
cool sig |
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06-20-03, 07:19 AM | #13 | ||||||
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upin
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