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05-04-05, 01:04 AM | #1 | |||||||
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Just A Keystyle, Please Leave Feed, Favors Will Be Returned
IP: 2E75 EE69
L.C. 2nd verse spttin words that hurt
Puttin bitches in the dirt this game you serve not burn I curse and blurt obnoxious explicit lyrics Screamin fuck the world loud so all ya bitches hear it I aint disappearin for awhile started at an early age I'll be here for atleast another 2 decades spittin venomous rage hey soon there'll be LC wannabes Runnin around walkin, talkin and actin like me Ya see i aint another Slim shady But there will be debating on which mother fucker's me Yea like 2 Pac Shakur screamin fuck the world Like Eminem sayin i'll fuck your girl like Bizzy Bone sayin i only fuck with soldjas And like Jay Z sayin brush the dirt of ya shoulders Like Mr Obra sayin we'll kick like a contraction And now i'm screamin motha fucka Northside of Akron That's what's happenin, walk thru traffic stop the action Man i've had haters on my dick, i'm still laughin Grab the gas and matches a lyrical difraction Leave ya body in fractions , i explode like a chemical reaction Watchin ya body contrast then move it out of its place Pump a slug to ya chest bullets go flyin at ya face Left without a trace, you know i'm still scratchin the surface I'm like scrilla lurkin on the sidelines attackin with purpose
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05-04-05, 01:12 AM | #2 | ||||
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IP: B52C 6258
this was decent for a keytyle, some of it didn't make sense sometimes and ya flow kinda was off and on also. but i liked this bar here
Grab the gas and matches a lyrical difraction Leave ya body in fractions , i explode like a chemical reaction ya need to work on ya flow tho, alot of ya bars sounded choppy and sometimes it seemed like u just tried to put in big words as filler, unless thats your style. idk go wit what u want,only problem i see is ya flow, and maybe a lil better punches. but overall i give it a 7/10 RETURN THE FAVOR LINKS ARE IN THE SIG |
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05-04-05, 01:28 AM | #3 | ||||
leave you rest'n pz's
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IP: 79B1 EDD4
complexity needs work, flow fell off in points
some decent concepts, but for a keystyle this was aight, overall big city nailed alot of points about your verse, try to expand on them thou
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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts what the fuck, was you high..? did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...! . . fake fucks..move on...! |
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05-04-05, 02:31 AM | #4 | |||||||
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yet again ¤ÐÅž¤ you leave no link lol....leave a link i will return the favor.....but i seem to see you often in battles so if i see you in a battle i'll vote....uppin this shit
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05-04-05, 02:32 AM | #5 | |||||||
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