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10-14 lines
No crew/hate/dr votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No Feeding

Minimum posts to vote: 100

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e-dubz has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-13-04 11:38 PM.

pictureperfect2 has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-14-04 12:01 AM.

so you can bet when you see dubz, you gonna see the fifth quick
then get ripped apart quicker then an orphan'd childs christmas list
dubz rippin this nigga....... with more ‘punches’ then ‘kool-aid’
my spits is off the top of the dome like ugly......... tu-pays
and if its beef u got.......... imma handle it one or two ways
either freestyles or puttin guns in yo mouth like toothpaste
im so far ahead of this nigga........ when it come to dissin
so when im done u’d be lucky to....... have a pot to piss in
im gonna paint a 'perfect picture' like........ wes craven
my flow's so hot it'll go through u and leave yo chest achin
with punches hittin harder then balls thrown by Tarkanton
spit my last bar leavin the competition shakin like Parkison's

Tarkanton was a quarterback for the vikings..

(His name looks blazed, above his title)……..

like the rest of ya blunts in philly, my sig tells ya your getting smoked
Im getting this dubz blazed silly, his name saw it comin, it already showed
Ya dubz, I wish I could give it to u that you’re the finest in philly, but that’d be silly
cuz even teanage mom’s know”parents just don’t understand” so haha u 2nd to big willy
had to fuckin correct this little bitches shit, he only sick wit cancer
fuck this dumb fuck in the city of the 6ers, he still don’t have “THE ANSWER”
Imma leave u hangin like vinces arm in the rim, cuz ballin I speak fluently
This battle imma pretend im a NET, this bitch still could send a shot throw me
Broke bitch getting served by me and meals on wheels
only time u got a chance for income (in cum) is as he kneels
U couldn’t serve me wit beef if your employer bk delivered
He say he got hard punches, but we see after the battle (he miss figured )

up ta the top

up ..

Voted For: e-dubz

ok e good flow and struture and descent punches it could be better but you got some good hits off and you got good vocab5/10
pic horrible flow your structure is all fucked up and your vocab needs work you your punches are good but you just aint word them right4/10

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uppin....

Voted For: e-dubz

Picture Perfect- Ok Punches, Flow Was Decent, Some Played Wordplay Concepts

E-Dubs- Ok Punches, Flow Was Ok, Some Ok Metaphors

Punches- Tie
Flow- Tie
Wordplay- Picture
Metaphors- E Dubs
Originality- E Dubz
Structure- Tie

Final Vote---[b]E Dubz

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Voted For: e-dubz

okay...i just wanna know wun thing how da fukk did picture get ova 20 wins?????...im just returnin da favor

opener-dubz i like dat good punchline...pic dat shit was weak n barley ryhmed
structure-dubz i understood ya shit i aint have look across da screen da see da end of ya line
punchlines-dubz of course..pic "sick with caner" is played da fukk out
multis-nun
creativity-umm a tie
personals-a tie
finisher-nun i wasn't feelin nun of dem shits
enjoyed-dubz....i dont know how ppl vote on battle's sayin all dis dat wasn't a punch when they dont ryhme how they vote on other niggaz battles...but dubz took dis shit easly pic ya ryhme scheme is wack as fukk....half ya shit was played..dis aint a hate vote im just returnin da favor....

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U NOT FUKKiN WiTH ME PLaiN N SiMP!...

Da "SiCKEST ON DiS SiTE" LiNE HaS BEEN USED aGaiNST ME 50 x'S...U DUDES aBUSED iT

"im just returnin da favor" oh ok no problem, he votes on ya shit, u vote on his regardless..... i know how dick riding works.... no worries

^ i didnt even vote on any of his battles..anyway uppin

uppin again...