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05-05-05, 11:14 AM | #1 | ||
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u betta....... * lyricalmatermind= warning*
IP: 5EDE 3789
u beat me with a no-show and u dont wanna rematch the battle,
so this is ya warning.... Ayo, My flows clean.. serving these kids with wording, perfect.. announcin Wars on Stars, and Skywalkin on ya earthly surface.. u still learnin the scripts.. i've studied & majored.. & after all the times i've killed u, by now, u must be indangered.. readers, loving the flavor.. no denying, aint worth to argue.. I bring the verse to charr dude, with the words to scar you.. i'm cursed n harmful.. flow will serve n starve you.. Aint seen u in a while doggy, ur show was dope, I was lovin it I always wondered where that dude from NY Undercover went That widows peak is wack, barber had some shitty cutters Cuz u lookin like the latino version of Eddie Munster & kid u so yellow u could blend in against the wall Plus it must be hard as fuck to blink.. ..when ur eyebrows r 7 inches tall lips like blastin 4, beef i aint ask for it thou.. but MAN UP AND LETS DO THIS THE RIGHT WAY I AINT NO AVERAGE JOE..... * from the show* lyricalmatermind lets do this 16 lines come with it.... |
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05-05-05, 11:23 AM | #2 | |||||
Cus I Jus Ma$fit Dis Shit
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IP: 964F D870
damn...structure was ass but still a nice read...come tryout for tha lunatiks if u wanna be in a crew...peep my shit "gettin attention"...1
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05-06-05, 11:48 AM | #3 | ||
This is my first post!
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IP: 819B 3425
upp'in for more replys...
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05-06-05, 01:11 PM | #4 | |||
Get Stomped.
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IP: 402E 6731
y flows clean.. serving these kids with wording, perfect..
announcin Wars on Stars, and Skywalkin on ya earthly surface.. that was pure dopeness homie good drop...............
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05-07-05, 10:06 AM | #5 | ||
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IP: 819B 3425
thanks for u'r feed back....
upp'in for more feed back plez...
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documented murder ^^ holla at me if u wanna join.... DUCKED = RED BULL * LOL WHAT A LAME * last battle K.O ~christyles~ 5-0 whos next!! |
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05-07-05, 07:48 PM | #6 | |||||
The story goes. Bill, B.
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aiight this was hot...gettin at my homie Lyrical but at least it was good...maybe he doesntave credits to battle...he battles a lot lol...anyway rtf on the long OM in my sig..9/10
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05-08-05, 04:02 AM | #7 | ||
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IP: E956 B690
thanks alot for ya feed back nah i dont have beef just want a proper battle u feel me?
thanks again upp'in
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documented murder ^^ holla at me if u wanna join.... DUCKED = RED BULL * LOL WHAT A LAME * last battle K.O ~christyles~ 5-0 whos next!! |
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05-08-05, 12:06 PM | #8 | |||||||
New to RV
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IP: 39BE 94C1
I thought it was good the flow was really good, I think that it will sound good in audio with a hot beat.
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