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02-16-04, 06:44 PM | #1 | |||||||
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Guardian Angel (Feat. Eternal)
IP: 3C7F 758C
Aight yo...Me and my brother been recordin alotta material lately, so we decided to hit thiz shit up right here...itz called "Guardian Angel"....I take the intro the he spit the first verse...I take the hookz and the second verse az well, then he ripz the 3rd verse..some real shit az alwayz for yall mafuckaz....Az far az im concerned thiz track seemz pretty flawlezz, holla at me wit some feedback.....
"Guardian Angel" www.soundclick.com/troublesome |
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02-16-04, 10:02 PM | #2 | ||||||
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IP: 6E20 6360
yea i listened to this song...actually i listened to like 4 or 5 songs on your page...just never left feedback...anyway...this song was good...you got real good emotion...and you got that rappers voice...your lyrics are basic...but the way you rap them...you make them sound so good....you got everything down-packed...now your brother...is also got a real good flow and that rappers voice also....but your emotion is way better than his...like...he dont sound comfortable on the mic...someim he does though..but you sound real comfortable on the mic...which is a plus...
on the song about ya'lls mom...called I Apologize...i loved that beat...and that is one your best songz...i definitly felt everything ya'll was sayin man...only thing you need to work on is your quality...your quality is so-so...other than tha...im loving your tracks homie...Stay Up God Bless....One Luv... ~KJ~
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02-17-04, 09:05 AM | #3 | |||||||
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IP: 4A30 FE71
Yeah, my brother juzt started recordin on the mic a few weekz ago cuz he just got outta prison........he gettin alot better tho yo, thanx for the feedback by the way....much appreciated
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02-17-04, 07:56 PM | #4 | |||||||
Middle Weight
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IP: 5F03 7A88
yo when is yo cd gonna be finished, cause all the new shit u been puttin on ya soundclick page is tight........im lookin forward to dat..........but yo.......
listenin.........opener is good.......im feelin it.......im also likin the beat.......sounds good wit the lyrics.......eternal has excellent flow, and his lyrics r pretty tight........im feelin that verse.........i like how the hook sounds wit this beat.......makes it sound real nice.........ur verse..........ur flow is perfect........really feelin it........ur voice fits real good wit the sound of the beat........nice lyrics finish makin this verse an almost perfect one.........im still feelin the hook........the third verse is another wit great flow and lyrics........ overall this song was tight........9/10.........that shit was great....... keep droppin dawg........
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02-17-04, 07:58 PM | #5 | |||||||
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IP: 7A4D C9C3
hommie this shit is ill man the thing that u can do
hella good is creat a chors i hate creating chorisis u gots to keep this shit up |
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02-17-04, 08:21 PM | #6 | ||||||
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IP: AB52 5700
Listenin ....... Beat Is Pretty Coo ... I'm Not Really Feelin' Ya Brother's Voice ... He's Straight Tho .... Hook Is PRetty Nice .. I'm Feelin' The Hook ... Ya Voice Is Much Cooler Too .. Ya U Do Sound More Comfortable on The Mic ... Ya Verse Was Coo ... Maybe a Little Too Much Energy But It's Coo ... I See Where Ya Comin' From .. Nice Topic And Emotion On It .... Stay Up!
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02-17-04, 08:38 PM | #7 | ||||||
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IP: ABE7 8185
I apoligize.... I love this tune man...Im really feeling your lyrics bruv...... keep it up, im liking your shit a lot... elevate
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02-17-04, 08:49 PM | #8 | |||||||
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IP: 631C DF1A
yea man every1 has said it this is sick shit u throwin down
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02-17-04, 09:57 PM | #9 | |||||||
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IP: ECA7 C399
good work man... nice beat, good flow to the beat, nice companionship in the song. keep it up
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