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05-30-04, 09:57 PM | #1 | |||||||
i changed my title !!
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rising sun vs. valor
IP: 275E DC37
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battles go up sunday night around 10:00 pm eastern check in by wedsday verses due by thrusday votes due by the next sunday around 9:00pm eastern rules: no dick riding no crew votes no freeposting that's what the beef thread is for if you do it here more then three times your dq'd no feeding off of other guys verse bar limits: 4 line min. 16 line max.
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win loss record 18-19 with 7 k.o's and sign up for the battle league would yeah, also show up if your already in the league |
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05-30-04, 10:13 PM | #2 | |||||
A Reflection Of The Past
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IP: EC0B 84C7
checkin in......
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05-30-04, 10:15 PM | #3 | |||||
Light Weight
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IP: AD77 9B5A
Check In................................................ .......
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06-03-04, 03:33 AM | #4 | |||||
A Reflection Of The Past
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IP: EC0B 84C7
im battling this dude with no real dope raps....
my rymes hitting this bitch so hard he's having anxiety attacks..... dawg, your more brain less then eddy hascal...... attaking you like hembroids attack the asswhole.... this dudes skill level will never be ''RISING''..... his skill is like saddam's ''SUN''always hiding....(aint none) i'd help you with your problems,but im not wack so i dont know the feeling.... my flows hit you like a missile destroys a building...... damn i love being able to be working dudes..... but in this battle i didn't need flow because i just got done merking you
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06-03-04, 09:41 PM | #5 | |||||
Light Weight
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my verse
IP: 8BE4 B21A
My verse is like AI’s crossover, you know that your gonna-get-shooked
Like the Pistons coming into the Finals…. You know that your ass is gonna-get-whopped About-to-get-booked as I find-the-violence To murk-this-tyrant with flows harder than that of fire-hydrants I am not so silent so I’m gonna be honest…. DirtBoy should make me a promise to never make me to battle this novice You’re the ultimate loser in this community like “fat”-“nerds” It’s your destiny to lose, so you better spin the “wheels of fortune” back-wards While “ducking” like quacked-birds, you’ll spit whack-words Turn you to a black-herb possessing a dream by having “chicken wings”* I’m nice like Lincoln rims and call my verse Baron Davis cause it-can-sting You’ll never have a chance like a midget trying block Yao-Ming Your colder than the ghe-ttos as your verse contradict what your rec.-shows Come with your best-flows, couldn’t be tough as a rhino even if you wore all Ecko Your like harmless lizards cause you’ve been wack straight from the GECKO *chicken wings=wings are a symbol for dreams, and calling someone a pussy means there are a chicken. So I am saying he is scared to dream…..sorry for the explanation
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06-03-04, 09:53 PM | #6 | |||||||
i changed my title !!
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IP: 275E DC37
breakdown for rising sun:
flow:workin for me i had no problems with it good job 6/10 volcab:alright i guess nothing against it coming from me alright job 6/10 punches: best line,"To murk-this-tyrant with flows harder than that of fire-hydrants" kinda played idea but you did alright here 6/10 overall:18/30 well rounded verse lacked anything to really help stand out from the others in the league though breakdown for valor: flow:kinda choppy some of the bars got way outta hand and too long without any real internal rhyming to help it out not a great job here 4/10 volcab:nothing really to talk about you could use some work 5/10 punches:i wasn't liking any of this you need some work here too 5/10 overall:14/30 gotta say better then alot of my early stuff you'll pick it up just keep working on it vote--rising sun
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win loss record 18-19 with 7 k.o's and sign up for the battle league would yeah, also show up if your already in the league |
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06-03-04, 10:48 PM | #7 | |||||||
bingo!
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IP: AAF4 20CB
rising sun.........
you had good evrything but you lacked good flow and strucutre and this in my oppinion lost you the battle My verse is like AI’s crossover, you know that your gonna-get-shooked Like the Pistons coming into the Finals…. You know that your ass is gonna-get-whopped ^^ holy shit that lin was fucking terrible you should get booted from rb for that shit WACK overall *5* ( i dont see what dirtboy was so happy about,ur verse sucked) ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- valor............. you had a better verse you had betetr structure than him and kept it flowing so this won you the battle this dudes skill level will never be ''RISING''..... his skill is like saddam's ''SUN''always hiding. that blew thios battle away for u not a great spit but got the job done........... overall *6* --------------------------------------------------------------- my vote valor
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06-04-04, 08:15 PM | #8 | ||||
RV AUDIOS BEST
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IP: C06D 063F
ok i am gonna break this down
valor- ok man idk man your punches were hitin but not hard enough you had some personals but they were just plays off his name nothin special word man risin- man punches were weak man ok, but you had one or to personals that were way better than his you elevated nasty since we battled word man v/ rising
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06-05-04, 12:13 AM | #9 | |||
The Truth
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IP: B682 856F
Rising had better flow and Punches i just wasnt feelin Vaor not good disses or Punches.
RS=6.434/10 V=5.323/10
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06-06-04, 08:00 PM | #10 | |||||||
i changed my title !!
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IP: 275E DC37
3-1 rising sun wins
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