Phenom | Kingz | Dabatos | TonySelf | Tha Q | Half Breed | Tito | 7th End | RV Radio |
04-19-04, 09:22 AM | #1 | |||||||
i changed my title !!
|
the_crazy_one vs. 2bad
IP: 275E DC37
deadlines:
battles go up monday check in by wedsday verses due by thrusday votes due by sunday rules: no dick riding no crew votes no freeposting that's what the beef thread is for if you do it here more then three times your dq'd no feeding off of other guys verse bar limits: 4 bar min. 16 bar max.
__________________
win loss record 18-19 with 7 k.o's and sign up for the battle league would yeah, also show up if your already in the league |
|||||||
04-20-04, 11:32 AM | #2 | ||||
Banned: Biting
|
IP: BA0C 67FA
allright sorry dirtboy69 i got sick and crashed my computerso ill drop in a few thanks for the scond try
|
||||
04-20-04, 11:52 AM | #3 | ||||
Banned: Biting
|
IP: BA0C 67FA
2bad hope your good enough
here i go this rap game aint a game\ no more with me up in it\ cause with me in the game\ someones goina end up like biggie or pac\ cause im turnin back time with this lyrical battles\ cause little boys and girls who died back in the day\ now there all jumpin up out of there grave\ and goin to collage Raves and partyin it up\ even though they were once befor all dead\ the little girls are now givin the anarchist all head\ now to get on the subject of this fool 2bad\ been on here less then a month and already started a crew now thats perrty fuckin sad\ a little hint you may want to get a little bit of a rep\ startin a crew after less then a month on this site the only people you will get are the noobs who think there bad\ when really there ass are sad\ |
||||
04-20-04, 03:13 PM | #4 | ||||
Banned: Biting
|
IP: BA0C 67FA
allright im ready for ya so now you can drop for me
|
||||
04-21-04, 09:20 AM | #5 | |||||
New to RB
|
IP: 0358 0BEE
2BAD.. .CHECKETY CHECKTY CHECKIN IN MAR'FUCKA
I'd rather wipe my ass with broken glass// or choke on gas// than lose 2 you// 2 be true im in a different class// so think fast// make sure u spit dope// I drop flows like foes// while u just hit and hope// like the pope// im a preacher// here 2 teach ya// tho we both stand here// u know that im the main feature// your like a creature// out the blue lagoon// your moma wish she saw a picture// wen u were in the womb// she wud not of resumed// with the pregnancy// she'd of took a vacum// between her legs u see// and instead of growin up 2 be retarded// thinkin that he know's it all// he wud of been discarded// at the hospital disposal// but wait.. let me give credit where credit is due// he's right// i need 2 build respect// b 4 i build a crew// but this dudes a CREW FILLER and u know that it's true// how the fuck can i elevate battlin bitches like u!!! |
|||||
04-21-04, 09:23 AM | #6 | ||||
Banned: Biting
|
IP: 4BD0 87AE
allright lets up this
man no hate on the crew thing holla at me |
||||
04-21-04, 07:46 PM | #7 | ||||
Created New Account
|
IP: C1F6 3A36
average battle but aight spit from two newbies.
2bad had sum gud flow and he had gud structure in his spit. his punches were cool wit some gud connections but u need to elevate if u hope to win against experinced rappers. ure shit was pretty basic and ure lines were way too short in places. crazy had aight flow and structure and his punches were fairly weak and didnt connect aswell as 2bads. u had a nice multi at the end but really u need to elevate and get sum more multis and sum personals in ure spit. Overall my vote goes to 2Bad!! |
||||
04-21-04, 08:14 PM | #8 | ||||
O.wning Y.ou D.aily
|
IP: 0F7A 2931
2bad definately takes this one hands down........... One's shit didn't even rhyme half the time. 2Bad hit wit some good punches and that is what gets wins................
Vote - 2bad
__________________
|
||||
04-22-04, 03:36 AM | #9 | |||||
I'm So Punny
|
IP: 95FF 1D86
good battle...pretty one sided though this was my break down....
the crazy one...( these are grades for pairs of lines...) 1.5 come on 2.5 what is this? 3.5 wheres the personal??? no punch! 4.5 how does talking about college raves...win a battle? 5.5.5 finally something that rhymed...but where is the personal or punch 6.8 finally something...that was pretty good...bad structure though 7.6 kind of a punch 8.6.5 fine...whateva though now 2 bad 1.7.5 pretty tight...nice multi...good shit...weak punch though 2.8 haha that was pretty good...i like your structure... 3.9 oh shit...clever...pope...funny shit...good line 4.9 damn....blue lagoon...original i like it 5.5 what...ya lost me...not good...disgarded...nope not good...so played 6.5 you can't comeback to what he says....read the rules 7.9 nice closer...you can't elevate...against guys like this...but he'll get better... v-2bad
__________________
|
|||||
04-22-04, 10:21 AM | #10 | |||||||
DaTrus Is A Bitch!
|
IP: 522F F919
.:: Aight Check Dis ::. The_Crazy_One: 3/10 Your Spit Wasn't Really Hitting WIth Punches, Was Short and The Structure/Flow Was Wack. No Metas, Multis, or Vocab Within This Whole Piece. Please Elevate. 2bad: 4/10 Not Many Punches In Your Verse, Just A Whole Lotta Shit About Stupid Stuff. But The Only Reason Your Verse Won Was Because You Actually Had Sum Bars and You Tried To Diss Him. Please Elevate and Stay Active. Vote - 2bad ~R~ |
|||||||
04-22-04, 12:10 PM | #11 | ||||||
Street Royal-T
|
IP: 3EEB 5381
too bad took this quite easy.
like the pope// im a preacher// here 2 teach ya// tho we both stand here// u know that im the main feature// your like a creature// out the blue lagoon// your moma wish she saw a picture// wen u were in the womb// she wud not of resumed// with the pregnancy// she'd of took a vacum// between her legs u see// nice lines. werent great but enough to beat crazy1 easliy he had better flow with some nice multi's crazy some of ya bars didnt even rhyme come dog this is da league - step it up next time, nice try tho v/2bad
__________________
Street Royal-T
|
||||||
04-22-04, 02:19 PM | #12 | |||
Flyweight
|
IP: 6DCA 81D9
You both suck horribly...
Learn what wordplay is... learn what metas are... learn what wit is.. Blah... the second kid took it... And still sucked |
|||
04-23-04, 10:52 AM | #13 | |||||||
i changed my title !!
|
IP: 275E DC37
breakdown for the_crazy_one:
flow:it flowed alright i guess kinda on a basic tip though 6/10 volcab:average if not below average really basic 5/10 punches:nothing really alot of describing how your better then him and not enough of making fun of him 4/10 overall:15/30 you got alot of improving to do but keep trying breakdown for 2bad: flow:alright some good internal rhyming to tighten it up 7/10 volcab:basic try uppin this next week 5/10 punches:not much the was really direct your opener probably the best,"I'd rather wipe my ass with broken glass// or choke on gas//than lose 2 you// 2 be true im in a different class//" better then your oppenent though 6/10 overall:18/30 good job vote--2bar wins this in my eyes just on a whole other level then that of the_crazy_one keep posting though and you two can both improve
__________________
win loss record 18-19 with 7 k.o's and sign up for the battle league would yeah, also show up if your already in the league |
|||||||
04-23-04, 02:19 PM | #14 | |||||
retired.
|
IP: 75F5 BDD1
Wow... 2bads closer alone took this one.. nice punch, much better flow than crazy.. better rhyming, better punches.. crazy: it's pretty bad when only 3 bars in your verse is actually about your opponent. you had a decent personal in there... but seriously this is a battle, you should be going out punching
__________________
RIP SMOKAJOKA WE WILL MiSS YOU!!!!!!
|
|||||
04-25-04, 12:36 PM | #15 | ||||
Banned: Biting
|
IP: EC0B 84C7
2bad diffintly took this battle he had an actual flow structure and vocab and words that ryhmed. He also had punches. His oponite had nothin on him.
vote 2bad |
||||
Thread Tools | Search this Thread |
Display Modes | |
|
|