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Old 05-20-07, 09:26 AM   #1
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Round 2: Jay 3rd 1-0 .vs Phil Benjamin 0-1

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Battles Up Tuesday.
House Rules 10-14 lines
Verses Due Friday.
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Old 05-20-07, 11:39 AM   #2
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Old 05-21-07, 09:13 PM   #3
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Old 05-24-07, 08:55 PM   #4
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dawg u pose to be booted so appreciate ya stay//
leave u like ya avatar but i'll Tuck ya feet away//
fill u wit belly wit cement and watch u eat the pave//
Evidence? please i'm like the Bulls i throw the Heat Away//
and i'll stab u wit the pencil just watch ya flow-leak//
and my level too high dawg you'll catch a nose-bleed//
0-1? that aint a battle record, thaz score for girls numbers//
ugly ass bitch couldnt win a beauty contest for plumbers//
i roll wit BTR kid and we straight smoke u wack herbs//
only friends u got is when u type in ya password//
and u got an LP big whoop u still cant see me//
first thing i thought was "only a faggot rhymes the name of they Cd"//

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Old 05-24-07, 10:05 PM   #5
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okay son

you write simple lines, i can tell text ain't for you dumb bitch
your way out of ya league jay...the audio one is the forum above this
i'll kidnapp an murder you, so any shots you send won't harm me
when i leave you mia, there wont be any sun, beachs or palm trees
your an easy win for us, cuz nuthin you spit is near dope
i'll roll up on the jay, spark'em,
...then pass'em around for the whole league too smoke
weak structure an played punchs, your verse's just suck dude
i haven't seen so many slashes on one body..since the last time i cut you
you'll get the one banger, my hands heaver than bricks
i'll hit'em wit sucha second round KO..canibus asked me to do the remix
i'm too fast to hit, so you can throw fist's wit rage
cause my face'll get less hit's than ya soundclick page
 
Old 05-25-07, 05:34 PM   #6
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Old 05-25-07, 05:46 PM   #7
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dawg u pose to be booted so appreciate ya stay//
leave u like ya avatar but i'll Tuck ya feet away//
oookay start...
fill u wit belly wit cement and watch u eat the pave//
Evidence? please i'm like the Bulls i throw the Heat Away//
the 1st line is horrible.. 2ed is decent...
and i'll stab u wit the pencil just watch ya flow-leak//
and my level too high dawg you'll catch a nose-bleed//
oookay.
0-1? that aint a battle record, thaz score for girls numbers//
ugly ass bitch couldnt win a beauty contest for plumbers//
kinda funny no punch thou...
i roll wit BTR kid and we straight smoke u wack herbs//
only friends u got is when u type in ya password//
aight decent... much better...
and u got an LP big whoop u still cant see me//
first thing i thought was "only a faggot rhymes the name of they Cd"//
preety weak ending man...

you had 1 decent bar in there....



you write simple lines, i can tell text ain't for you dumb bitch
your way out of ya league jay...the audio one is the forum above this
eeeh start...
i'll kidnapp an murder you, so any shots you send won't harm me
when i leave you mia, there wont be any sun, beachs or palm trees
preety decent...
your an easy win for us, cuz nuthin you spit is near dope
i'll roll up on the jay, spark'em,
...then pass'em around for the whole league too smoke
ookay..
weak structure an played punchs, your verse's just suck dude
i haven't seen so many slashes on one body..since the last time i cut you
aight..
you'll get the one banger, my hands heaver than bricks
i'll hit'em wit sucha second round KO..canibus asked me to do the remix
ha decent... plus that 2ed round knock out by canibus was hot lol...
i'm too fast to hit, so you can throw fist's wit rage
cause my face'll get less hit's than ya soundclick page
HAHA NICE ENDING....

vote: Phil Benjamin clearly shut'em down hard body...
really no comp in this one... he had way harder punches more creative and i thought was more original with better concepts.... NICE DROP Phil Benjamin I DIG's IT....
 
Old 05-26-07, 02:02 PM   #8
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jay:
dawg u pose to be booted so appreciate ya stay//
leave u like ya avatar but i'll Tuck ya feet away//
2/5 - Weak Opener.
fill u wit belly wit cement and watch u eat the pave//
Evidence? please i'm like the Bulls i throw the Heat Away//
3/5 - ok.
and i'll stab u wit the pencil just watch ya flow-leak//
and my level too high dawg you'll catch a nose-bleed//
2/5 - nah.
0-1? that aint a battle record, thaz score for girls numbers//
ugly ass bitch couldnt win a beauty contest for plumbers//
3/5 - iight.,
i roll wit BTR kid and we straight smoke u wack herbs//
only friends u got is when u type in ya password//
4/5 - niice.
and u got an LP big whoop u still cant see me//
first thing i thought was "only a faggot rhymes the name of they Cd"//
3/5 - ok closer.
17/30


Phil:
you write simple lines, i can tell text ain't for you dumb bitch
your way out of ya league jay...the audio one is the forum above this
4/5 - niice opener.
i'll kidnapp an murder you, so any shots you send won't harm me
when i leave you mia, there wont be any sun, beachs or palm trees
2/5 - meh.
your an easy win for us, cuz nuthin you spit is near dope
i'll roll up on the jay, spark'em,
...then pass'em around for the whole league too smoke
4/5 - niice.
weak structure an played punchs, your verse's just suck dude
i haven't seen so many slashes on one body..since the last time i cut you
2/5 - nah.
you'll get the one banger, my hands heaver than bricks
i'll hit'em wit sucha second round KO..canibus asked me to do the remix
3/5 - decent.
i'm too fast to hit, so you can throw fist's wit rage
cause my face'll get less hit's than ya soundclick page
2/5 - ok closer.
17/30

Tie-Breaker best line in battle:
you write simple lines, i can tell text ain't for you dumb bitch
your way out of ya league jay...the audio one is the forum above this


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Old 05-26-07, 06:31 PM   #9
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JAY 3RD
dawg u pose to be booted so appreciate ya stay//
leave u like ya avatar but i'll Tuck ya feet away//
Lol, I like the personal on the avy, nice
fill u wit belly wit cement and watch u eat the pave//
Evidence? please i'm like the Bulls i throw the Heat Away//
Wording In the setup was shit…decent punch
and i'll stab u wit the pencil just watch ya flow-leak//
and my level too high dawg you'll catch a nose-bleed//
Played
0-1? that aint a battle record, thaz score for girls numbers//
ugly ass bitch couldnt win a beauty contest for plumbers//
No….This was Shitt
i roll wit BTR kid and we straight smoke u wack herbs//
only friends u got is when u type in ya password//
….Nothing complex, and no direction at all
and u got an LP big whoop u still cant see me//
first thing i thought was "only a faggot rhymes the name of they Cd"//
Wasn’t a strong closer…Not creative enough for n/p…





PHIL
you write simple lines, i can tell text ain't for you dumb bitch
your way out of ya league jay...the audio one is the forum above this
Hahaha, this was a decent personal…wording could be better though
i'll kidnapp an murder you, so any shots you send won't harm me
when i leave you mia, there wont be any sun, beachs or palm trees
Naw, im not feelin this
your an easy win for us, cuz nuthin you spit is near dope
i'll roll up on the jay, spark'em,
...then pass'em around for the whole league too smoke
Who’s us? What are you venom? Lol…And this bar is 1000 times played, lol…The J/weed/joint thing is hella over used
weak structure an played punchs, your verse's just suck dude
i haven't seen so many slashes on one body..since the last time i cut you
Wording was to stretched in the main punch
you'll get the one banger, my hands heaver than bricks
i'll hit'em wit sucha second round KO..canibus asked me to do the remix
Naw, not to mention the wording in the first line was bad
i'm too fast to hit, so you can throw fist's wit rage
cause my face'll get less hit's than ya soundclick page
PLAYED PUNCH! Man are soundclick punches played…



Overall: I think Phil has more talent battle wise, but he came very played in this battle and lacked any real creativity that stayed consistent. Jay had a good and decent bar, but then a played and a couple wack ones. So this battle actually ends up being close, but I think for being less played, I have to give it to Jay 3rd…
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Old 05-27-07, 11:46 PM   #10
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Jay-
i roll wit BTR kid and we straight smoke u wack herbs
only friends u got is when u type in ya password

Phil-
you write simple lines, i can tell text ain't for you dumb bitch
your way out of ya league jay...the audio one is the forum above this
your an easy win for us, cuz nuthin you spit is near dope
i'll roll up on the jay, spark'em,
...then pass'em around for the whole league too smoke

v/Phil for a overall better punches n verse
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Old 05-29-07, 10:37 AM   #11
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Phil Wins 1-1

Jay 3rd Loses 1-1
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