aight. this is my first rap battle

though a noob, i'll soon be revered
put your feet in cement, toss you off a pier
take you on a midnight ride like paul revere
one if by land and two if by sea
your coat is red from your coronary artery
they call me mighty cuz mine is extended
they call you righty cuz yours is bended
for my dick and your girl's pussy i didn't use a condom
it complicates it all and makes it hard to covalent bond them
you walked in when i was up in her grill
i had to quickly spill then jump off your windowsill
now i'm the reason your girl's on the pill
you just got served a verbal slaughter -- want the bill?
if not, that's chill
but i'll proceed to lead a knife into your throat to give you gills
so now let's hear you bust out with your nonexistent rappin skills
-bojangler

btw, do like 10-20 lines. respond in less than 30 minutes.

wtf, I didn't know this thread was even opened. You gotta reply in Bitch Slapped first, How the hell I'm supossed to know the battle is goin down.

Anyways, I'm spittin now.

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Here it is:

Why this bitch steppin' up not knowing what it takes/
The only sick liquid flow you'll ever experience is when your bitches water breaks/
When you read this shit your gonna be exposed dead/
And before you get your first vote it'll be a closed thread/
Facing a psycho, There is no tellin' what I can do /
My battle Lyrics sting bitches and permentally display freaky images like tattoos/
Bitch I'll ring ya skull like christmas bells/
People be checkin in on your flow then sleeping on that whack shit like hotels/
Killing you is part of the plan to get five wins/
But battles resulting in the opponent getting made a bitch, this is where it begins/
What's this talk about fuckin' my girl? Thats the biggest rookie line ya know/
And you say you smell pussy, why don't you start by checking by under nose/
Your skill is too basic, you gotta elavate bitch/
Hell yea I want the bill for you "verbal slaughter", cause I'm leavin' ya nuts as the tip/

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let's have some votin, y'all ...

Uppin On Votes^^^^^^^

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check it that battle was gud
it was obvious to me tho who was the newB and who was experienced
Bojangler u had gud structure and ure flow was aight but ure shit was just basic. ure punches were weak and didnt connect, the plus point to ure battle was u put out an alrite multi to finish. basically u need to elevate ure multis, get sum originality and use personals and shit like that.
Oc6, gud battle, ure flow was on and ure structure was fat homey. ure punches were gud and direct hittin Bojangler hard. you had some gud vocab in there and a couple of aight personals, u need to use multis in ure spits cuz that shit will get u an automatic win most of the time if they're gud.
Vote = Oc6
but gud first spit from u bojangler.

what's a multi?

This is a multi:

When you read this shit your gonna be exposed dead/
And before you get your first vote it'll be a closed thread/

See how the last two words of the first line rhymed with the last two words on the second. Thats a multi.

UPPIN on those votes, thanks for the input Franchize.

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this was a late april fools joke?

bojangler u need to elevate seriuosly u didnt have any good punchs or personals the only thang that u had was that it actually flowed pretty well everythang else u need to elevate on

0c6 pretty good verse even though it didnt need to be just fed off his verse to much att the end but punchlines were solid an stayed comin closer was decent not that great youve done better opener should have been the second bar though best lines out the whole battle sick personal in it

vote/0c6

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^ even after it says if u dont understand dont vote


some people that are mods on here

oh yea hit these up
looch vs triple n
looch vs marvolousj

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^ even after it says if u dont understand dont vote


some people that are mods on here

yo, it was my first battle -- anyhow, prepare yo ass for some serious "elevation."

Good lookin, still uppin^^^^^^^^^^^^^

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I gotta give this battle to oc6 for some better punches and better wordplay. You had some good flow goin and dropped some good multi's even better that you helped out boj, boj man.. just take the tip that Oc6 gave ya and harden your punches and you'll get better... vote-oc6

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