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09-18-05, 08:46 PM | #1 | ||||||
Middle Weight
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Want To Be A Writer #2
IP: CF74 5D3A
Want To Be A Writer #2
The thought vary and linger slow like a Jerry Springer show Too much trailer park trash, detailer of art fast with a stinger flow To become a writer triggered soft and flickered off and on Inside my head, pride led me to strive, motivation tossed strong At me by moms and pops had to stay calm a lots around home Getting punched not funny especially for my lunch money The dollar is great but couldn’t tolerate that thug bunch they crummy And that was all day in the hallway self preservation grips fast Had to skip class a few times but still wrote true rhymes never trash Cats tried to pass the grass divine I just drank a glass of wine Or knotty head and watch a hottie’s red lips and A big brown behind Words be clear wasn’t until my third year in high school After being silly, shook and bold the possibility took hold and ruled My intuition and refueled my ignition books and soul are my tools Before then distinguish forces made English courses boring not cool The homework made my dome perk couldn’t figure out verbs And nouns words tossed around like dice even bigger herds Of problems awaits me, founded grammar dull but it hammer My scull like a migraine headache the pain spread great no glamour As a whack buster wrote lackluster script teachers in fright stare Like it was a nightmare still grooved strong and moved along couldn’t share My true feelings they were too revealing |
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09-23-05, 03:41 PM | #2 | |||
1926
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IP: 3240 794D
This Is An O.M.
... Not Even A Good One At That. |
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09-24-05, 02:00 AM | #3 | ||||||
Maggot
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IP: CF74 5D3A
Atticus excuse me but can you show me a good one please or you just talking trying to jump on the bandwagon?
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09-25-05, 05:56 PM | #4 | |||
1926
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IP: 0825 899A
There's No 'Bandwagon' If I'm The First Responce.
And I Could Show You One, But That Takes Effort At My Expense ... So I'm Not Going To. |
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09-25-05, 08:44 PM | #5 | ||||||
New to RV
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IP: 3240 794D
Well i used to write like this ... i dont know if you do anyother poetry but i used this ryming style when i was a newb ... but i dont know if you are or not .. im new ... lol ... but i think that you need to stay away from the ryming everyother word .. it dont bring emotion to the poem you know? ... all you gotta do is find a certain style and structure you like to write with and write all your poems like that .. then move on to different poetry ... like freeverse and things like that ... i like the poem for what kind it is ... if you get that .. lol ... but i wanna see more werk from you ... cuz i can see you have poetic views ... lol ... nice drop man ...
Peace !! ~1~ |
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09-25-05, 08:57 PM | #6 | |||||
Never Around
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IP: 88B9 D29F
He didn't drop 2 links....
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09-26-05, 06:18 AM | #7 | |||
1926
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IP: 0825 899A
Yup, But Fluid Isnt On That Much.
I'd Like To Try And Get Mod Powers Of This Forum, But I Dont Think Strobe Will Just Give Them To Me ... If You Guys Vote It He Will. |
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09-26-05, 08:56 PM | #8 | ||||||
Maggot
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IP: CF74 5D3A
thanks to every one responded and Atticus you're a power hungry cat naw we don't need you as MOD hell BONECOLLECTER is one power hungry head and thats enough
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09-27-05, 06:17 AM | #9 | |||
1926
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IP: 28AD 5545
???, You're A Moron.
I Just Want To Be Able To Enforce The 'Two Link' Rule, Because I'm Tired Of Idiots Not Responding To Anything. How Can You Be 'Power Hungery' In A Poetry Forum? That Doesnt Even Make Sence, There's Not Really Any Personal Gain I'd Get From It. |
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09-27-05, 11:55 AM | #10 | ||||||
Maggot
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IP: CF74 5D3A
but man COECOLLECTER HAS BANNED ME AGAIN HE JUST MAKE AN ASS OUT OF THE MODERATER'S POSITION THAT WORTLESS BITCH NEED TO BE FIRED ON THE SPOT FO RPURPOSE OF FORUM IMPROVEMENT
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