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Some say the best love is one sprung from a friendship
So I feel we should try, Time leads us in this direction Should we follow it all the way down the line? Friendship and love are almost always intertwined. Sometimes i find, That things arent always meant to be, The reason why i love you, is liberation, means we're free. How crazy can i seem, for wanting to believe, that maybe i was good enuff, to believe in you and me. I guess what you really needed was just a friend, I tried to go farther, and yet a friend is what i have been. NO more, no less. I can just hold you to my chest. I will be a caring individual, honest, true and spiratual. you heart seams plead, that everything you need doesent reside in me.... unfinished poem, about a girl if u couldnt tell
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Mixtape Pushed Back to mid september.. Holla at me for a copy still I'm felt cause im real. Can you say the same ? Prolly not.
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That was pretty nice kid.
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IP: 9EB8 D17E
thanks man, still workin on it.. more feedback is always appreciated =)
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Can I Metaphor?
Mixtape Pushed Back to mid september.. Holla at me for a copy still I'm felt cause im real. Can you say the same ? Prolly not.
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it's coo i like the poem
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good poem kidd....alot of emotion...know where u comin from wit dat...keep it comin...peace
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nice emotion fam big up!!!!!!!!! and good luck with finishing it!!!!
check out mine!!!!!!!!!!! links in my signature!
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this was awesome, its nice to see a guy writing poems about his feelings, girls love this shit, whoever she is, u should let her read this........
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: EC0B 84C7
nice poem keep up the good job
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that's hot way to go
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