Battle Rules:

6 - 8 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Biting
No bullshit

Minimum posts to vote: 50

Check in by: 08-29-05 at 11:39 AM

Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in.

fraud has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-29-05 11:12 AM.

Vaskez has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-29-05 11:15 AM.

The table is set, & im gonna kill yet another
Cuz im the toast of the town & murder is the bread & butter

Imma pound vaskez so hard his head has craters, destroying his spline
N we know he aint original, cuz he serch for old-punches to flip like a trampoline

u aint a hero who came home from iraq when i say the whole block-is clappin *meaning shoting*
vaskez couldn’t move a crowd if he was throwin rocks at ‘em

vaskez was talking flagrant, aint no avoidin a beatin'
Then acted so rash... he needed some ointment to treat it


blah...

8 lines

Bitch ya produce more wack than a flyswat, ain't no mack
You gettin turned into a pin...
................................is the only time you successfully a-tack
I heard you're wack n' fraud-u-lent........out your lyrics
But still didn't get any INTEREST, that's how I hear it
My verse, ya better fear it, cos YOU rap as quiet as a mouse
N' it might seem like good in-tent...
.............................................but ya still sound shit "in tha house"
Get ya ass off the couch, but ya pussy, don't try steppin'
Cos if rap's your forte...then I'm the fuckin siege weapon

IF YA DON'T GET THE WORDPLAY, DON'T VOTE

I don't know the quality of voting around here, so:

fraudulent = fraud you lent (as in you lent out your lyrics but didn't earn/get
interest from anyone) you should get it
intent = in tent i.e. in a tent as opposed to in da house

the rest should be obvious, ask if ya don't get

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Fee Fi Fo Fum, now bitch I'm a giant
And your ass is like Jack, but your magic beans is wack
Skills is what you lack
I'm like a Benz, you ain't even like a Cadillac
Ya more like a Reagal
I'm a pittbull and you's a beagel

Yo let's get some votes. Leave a link I'll vote on your battle if you vote honestly and fairly

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Fee Fi Fo Fum, now bitch I'm a giant
And your ass is like Jack, but your magic beans is wack
Skills is what you lack
I'm like a Benz, you ain't even like a Cadillac
Ya more like a Reagal
I'm a pittbull and you's a beagel

Voted For: Vaskez

The table is set, & im gonna kill yet another
Cuz im the toast of the town & murder is the bread & butter
2....not a punch...self glorifing
Imma pound vaskez so hard his head has craters, destroying his spline
N we know he aint original, cuz he serch for old-punches to flip like a trampoline
4....played out concept......
u aint a hero who came home from iraq when i say the whole block-is clappin *meaning shoting*
vaskez couldn’t move a crowd if he was throwin rocks at ‘em
3....horrible punch
vaskez was talking flagrant, aint no avoidin a beatin'
Then acted so rash... he needed some ointment to treat it
3.....omg....u serious?

Bitch ya produce more wack than a flyswat, ain't no mack
You gettin turned into a pin...
................................is the only time you successfully a-tack
5...ok wordplay
I heard you're wack n' fraud-u-lent........out your lyrics
But still didn't get any INTEREST, that's how I hear it
7.....good punch and a good set-up along with it
My verse, ya better fear it, cos YOU rap as quiet as a mouse
N' it might seem like good in-tent...
.............................................but ya still sound shit "in tha house"
6....good wordplay in punch..but set-up was gay
Get ya ass off the couch, but ya pussy, don't try steppin'
Cos if rap's your forte...then I'm the fuckin siege weapon
5...ok

well..this was really one-sided.Fraud.That 1st bar with the bread and butter...not a punch..that's self-glorifing.That trampoline line was a played concept.Plus it had filler with that pointless original part.And the rash/trowin rocks lines...weak.

Vote-Vaskez
Rtf below in 3 days or this vote will be removed
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=206520

Peace, hope y'all getting the forté line (it's forté not fort ) up

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Fee Fi Fo Fum, now bitch I'm a giant
And your ass is like Jack, but your magic beans is wack
Skills is what you lack
I'm like a Benz, you ain't even like a Cadillac
Ya more like a Reagal
I'm a pittbull and you's a beagel

upp'in upp'in upp'in upp'inupp'in upp'in upp'in upp'inupp'in upp'in upp'in upp'in

voting is wack here......

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Fee Fi Fo Fum, now bitch I'm a giant
And your ass is like Jack, but your magic beans is wack
Skills is what you lack
I'm like a Benz, you ain't even like a Cadillac
Ya more like a Reagal
I'm a pittbull and you's a beagel

Voted For: Vaskez

Vaskez,
nice verse...good wordplay and punchlines were aiight.

fraud,
u need alot of work on ur flow dude...i cant catch it at all.

v/vaskez

RtF...if possible...battles are in my sig~~

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

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links have been voted on. uppin

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Fee Fi Fo Fum, now bitch I'm a giant
And your ass is like Jack, but your magic beans is wack
Skills is what you lack
I'm like a Benz, you ain't even like a Cadillac
Ya more like a Reagal
I'm a pittbull and you's a beagel

Voted For: Vaskez

The table is set, & im gonna kill yet another
Cuz im the toast of the town & murder is the bread & butter

Wordplay was alright here actually, not a good punch though

Imma pound vaskez so hard his head has craters, destroying his spline
N we know he aint original, cuz he serch for old-punches to flip like a trampoline

Stretched and I didn't like it

u aint a hero who came home from iraq when i say the whole block-is clappin *meaning shoting*
vaskez couldn’t move a crowd if he was throwin rocks at ‘em

Not bad, bit of a played concept though

vaskez was talking flagrant, aint no avoidin a beatin'
Then acted so rash... he needed some ointment to treat it

Not bad, best line of your verse


Bitch ya produce more wack than a flyswat, ain't no mack
You gettin turned into a pin...
................................is the only time you successfully a-tack

Yeah I liked this, nice wordplay, you should take the ...'s out though, cos they make it seem stretched

I heard you're wack n' fraud-u-lent........out your lyrics
But still didn't get any INTEREST, that's how I hear it

Not bad, decent homonym

My verse, ya better fear it, cos YOU rap as quiet as a mouse
N' it might seem like good in-tent...
.............................................but ya still sound shit "in tha house"

Pretty nice, original concept and worded well, same about the ...'s though

Get ya ass off the couch, but ya pussy, don't try steppin'
Cos if rap's your forte...then I'm the fuckin siege weapon

Decent again, good closer

Vaskez got this pretty easily, was better in every category and had nice concepts and punches.

v/ Vaskez

Fraud, could you drop a vote in my battle please:
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=206973

up biatches!.....

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Fee Fi Fo Fum, now bitch I'm a giant
And your ass is like Jack, but your magic beans is wack
Skills is what you lack
I'm like a Benz, you ain't even like a Cadillac
Ya more like a Reagal
I'm a pittbull and you's a beagel