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Old 03-30-03, 06:42 PM   #1
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Avalon [vs] T_Pound

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Old 03-30-03, 10:57 PM   #2
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da fuck..? I aint in a top class..? no heavy weight..?! I gotta merk the boards now...




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Old 03-31-03, 06:16 AM   #3
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Ai Yo i'll spit first.

ur like a bad joke with no punch line//
u bite and puke on RB at lunch time//
rappin without no clappin cause ya cant rhyme//

ur played out style belongs ina museum//
that way no real g's even seeim//

i hang with strickly gees//
so go slang ur burgers at micki dees//

ur a lost flea rappin like cosby//
ur shits so simple ya lost me//

u aint on this rebels level//
its like im god an ur the devel//

ur so phony u should be banned from rap//
shit us homies shouldn't even let ya clap//

fuc a gat..i could make this fake cat tap witha slap//

my rhymes are str8 classical//
ur lines are str8 irrational//

when u grab the mic//
the audience runs in fright//

u think ima kid//
i say go wipe ur bib an learn to like ur crib//
u were a twizzeler but now ur a nibblin nib//

i compare u to that of the handicapped//
so i'ma rap this cat around like hack sac//

u dont share words wit me cause ur scared of me//
u better start bitin to prepare for me//
cause when were fightin ur nothin compared to me//

ur just a beginner//
i'll smoke ur ass back like a pinner//
i'm a drug abuser annd a sinner//
still ur the loser an i'm the winner.
 
Old 03-31-03, 06:41 PM   #4
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This kids the shoulder in circle jerks, I'll just merk this member,
if he's a soldier, than we all GI Joes, I'll work this pretender...
T Pound should surrender, he's 10 levels below novice,
only top list he's been promised was Schendliers... GET IT..!?
Besides he's right, Av's not on his level, Kid is a rebel,
But that's kinda like sayin Mandy Moore is the devil...
Da hells a nibblin nib, this fuck rhymes what he can't say,
With punches I'm Ali, you follow behind me screamin BOMBYAYEE..!
Fuck it i'm sick, get crushed 'n you ain't duckin' my fist
I love this... quite funny how I don't need punches tah win...
Damn I'm gettin' under ya skin, you see? Av's leavin you scarred
Beat you far past consciencness, without using heavy bars...
should be fearin it... cos I’ll steer lead right into this queer’s head
I'm leary since he’s aimin for boo’s like he was shootin at beer kegs...
'the revolution of an emcee' is just some more clownin
cuz it really means TP's watchin me run circles around him...


there you go...




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Old 03-31-03, 08:46 PM   #5
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TPound is in need of major elevation . . .

I am guessing that Avalon wasn't trying very hard in this battle . . .

:: Damn I'm gettin' under ya skin, you see? Av's leavin you scarred
Beat you far past consciencness, without using heavy bars...

:: This kids the shoulder in circle jerks, I'll just merk this member,
if he's a soldier, than we all GI Joes, I'll work this pretender...

^^^^Best lines of the battle, even tho both were weak . . . It seems like neither one of you put much time into this battle . . . so Im not gonna waste anymore time on this vote . . .


My vote Avalon . . . for obvious reasons . . .
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Old 03-31-03, 08:55 PM   #6
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yo u both need help with punches, looked like a straight freestyle (what eva came in ya head).........

but im too lazy for an example but what ya did wrong pound.....ya linez were very small (bars are linez, not couple a words)

my vote: Avalon
 
Old 04-01-03, 12:21 AM   #7
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Avalon:

Besides he's right, Av's not on his level, Kid is a rebel,
But that's kinda like sayin Mandy Moore is the devil...

i liked this line of you verse the best- most of you punches were somwhat strong, and you had a good flow.

T Pound:

I can't find anything that I really liked about your verse (no disrespect) but heres an example of what I didn't like:

fuc a gat..i could make this fake cat tap witha slap//

your punches seemed really undelevoped. You should have put more time into this verse.

-Just a word of advice to to Pound (no disrespect):
try building a better structure around your rhymes, and it will help the voters catch the flow you are going for, it will also help with punches in the long run-------

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Old 04-01-03, 08:17 AM   #8
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Vote: Avalon

I dont even have to explain... the other kid was straight up wack

Av's verse wasnt that bad... but then again he didnt need a good verse to beat him
 
Old 04-01-03, 02:02 PM   #9
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true all that^

I mean, I could quote... I know tha rules for votin' but come on now...?

this is not a quotable battle, nor is it worthy...

Av won cause it was better... tha whole way round..

I think Av just came soft, cause that's all he needed.. no need for iLLness put to nothin'... ya know..

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Old 04-01-03, 06:18 PM   #10
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aight...

T_Pound you really shouldnt be in this league...i mean you have no structure...you have the vocab of a 4 yeard old...your flow aint that good...whack punches...

please check out after you get murdered by avalon...

i was actually considering not reading avalons verse because i could not fathom a worse battle verse then the one i had just read...

but i did....

avalon lines i felt

::Fuck it i'm sick, get crushed 'n you ain't duckin' my fist
I love this... quite funny how I don't need punches tah win::

now i know you didnt try on this verse so i aint even gonna say nuthin...

T-pound lines i felt

::Ai Yo i'll spit first::

vote : avalon
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Ok... this kid said my verse was worse... but voted for me..?
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Old 04-01-03, 06:33 PM   #12
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Old 04-01-03, 06:53 PM   #13
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"i was actually considering not reading avalons verse because i could not fathom a worse battle verse then the one i had just read...

but i did...."

that right there shows you are a idiot... You considered not reading mine... because you couldn't imagine a worse battle verse... but you did read it... Sound like even though you couldn't imagine it... you found one... Now... on to your next statement... Dunny... run along...
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word your a foriegn guy who cant understand words...
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Old 04-01-03, 09:04 PM   #15
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he was sayin he couldnt imagine a worse verse than the first one(Pound)....he was that confident in you Avalon...if u read it rite u will understand
 
 


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