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08-07-05, 04:28 AM
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Creativity and Shea...LOVe and LUst
IP: 08C3 D19B
aight thisis a riugh draft of an un finished track that me and my Girlfriend are making its just a rough draft so let me know what should be better and what not...
links http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=203066 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=203312 heres my link.... http://www.soundclick.com/djemsce |
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08-07-05, 12:37 PM
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IP: 0031 A54C
i like dis beat real nice n relaxin type.... adlibs are abit sloppy turn ur verse up abit its drowned by da ebat... delivery is pretty nice jus a tad more emotion would make it sickness flow slips on one spot cnt say wat line cos cnt hear ur lyrics properly... mhook is nice... whos singin??? sounds pretty nice.... second verse is short??? feelin dis man not bad lookin forward to a complete version keep it up.. if u not rollin wit any crew u know im lookin for a few more audio peeps for our audio roster
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08-16-05, 03:03 AM
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IP: 81D8 99D2
upppppppppppiiiiiinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn wheres the love
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