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GEEBS1 0 0%
I Shot Ya 5 100.00%
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Old 06-24-04, 11:50 AM   #1
I Shot Ya
New to RB
 
From: The Underground
I Shot Ya\\vs//GEEBS1

IP: 7BE2 A0A1

aight its set up...here are the rules
no bitin
no feedin
no crew votes
no hatin
no dickridin
10-15 lines
due 30 minutes after check in
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Old 06-24-04, 11:59 AM   #2
GEEBS1
Banned: Cheating
 
IP: E198 D20B

i shot ya needs to go ahead and shoot him self/
battling me? you might as well abuse yourself/
I drop the M.I.C coz i alway rock a hot mike/
i'll slap you and make your face turn red, like a stop light/
your not tight, so don't act like it/
it wouldn't be tight if it were vicegrips/
fuck a ckeck in, i'll write a verse quicker/
i'm like the pizza man, i always deliver/
you'll never make it in hip hop, you shits floped/
you've ran out of time like a broke clock with no tick tock/
you suck big cock, so just quit and listen to me spit/
i don't want him there but he's on my dick, like a bad case of syphlis/
 
Old 06-24-04, 12:12 PM   #3
I Shot Ya
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IP: 4289 77F4

lol oooookkkk...sike naw here go my check in for yo bitch ass and im dropin right after
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Old 06-24-04, 12:12 PM   #4
I Shot Ya
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From: The Underground
IP: 4289 77F4

Come on now this cats a clown he's goin down his names Geebs
I see he's tryin to come at me but had a hard time gettin off his knees
Geebs1 naw nigga neva dat hold a steady gat
so pick a plot where you spend the rest ya life at
I'll beat this nigga on my own I dont run wit no crew
We haven't been introduced im I Shot Ya bitch how do u do?
I think its great you picked ya own fate you made a mistake
Dont come at me with your rhymes more original than Corn Flakes
Fuckin crackhead dont end up dead you cant go out like Pac
Your just like Corn Pops except nigga "You Gotta have yo rock"
You shake holdin a gun it showes up on the rictor scale
Your highlite of the day is hearing "welcome you've got mail"
So next time before you rhyme think bout wut you sayin
U dont want ya moms on her knees for you hoping and prayin
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Old 06-24-04, 03:22 PM   #5
GEEBS1
Banned: Cheating
 
IP: E198 D20B

Votes?
 
Old 06-24-04, 04:07 PM   #6
thetruth#1
Banned: Cheating
 
IP: E198 D20B

Good battle, especially for a newbie
 
Old 06-26-04, 07:13 PM   #7
I Shot Ya
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From: The Underground
IP: 3240 794D

yo lets get some votes in here fa real....lets do somethin
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Old 06-28-04, 08:57 PM   #8
I Shot Ya
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IP: 4289 77F4

aight lets get some more votes in here and end this battle
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Old 06-28-04, 09:22 PM   #9
For$akeN
Umm...Yeah
 
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...................the guy you battling is banned homie so Ima just vote
for you cause you had aight punches, pretty good flow.....but you
have to up your vocabulary get creative with your rhymez more...
and use original rhymes that aren't that similiar to any other drop
on this or any other rap battling site....or songs ya heard????????????????????????????????????????????? ????????????????

good job....
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Old 06-28-04, 09:28 PM   #10
Tempa
~Cursed With Illness~
 
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From: Barrel Of Tha Gun
IP: D473 F2A6

Geebs - Had about 3 good punches but you need to extend your lines a little bit. Not all of em but the real short ones. It makes the flow of the verse distorted. But not bad overall.

I shot Ya - You had better lyrics and punches than Geebs. I also give you my vot cuz you had a lot better flow.
Vote - I shot ya.

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Old 06-29-04, 02:30 AM   #11
I Shot Ya
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From: The Underground
IP: 3240 794D

lol homeboy is banned yo so juss give me the rest of the votes anyway...i mean i won eitha way so...
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Old 06-30-04, 03:31 PM   #12
I Shot Ya
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From: The Underground
IP: 4289 77F4

ok can we close this battle and give me the win i mean dam.....wats takin so long
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Old 07-02-04, 01:40 PM   #13
pk
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IP: E21B 16D7

i know my vote dont count but i think I shot ya good punches
 
Old 07-06-04, 02:46 PM   #14
I Shot Ya
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From: The Underground
IP: 3240 794D

aight lets get some more votes in here and close this battle
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Old 07-12-04, 12:05 AM   #15
Wordz AhGod
ROFL @ u niggas since '04
 
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From: FLA
IP: 4289 77F4

Im a keep it short,

Geebs did'nt have damn thing to talk about, it was ok but in a battle U gotta come better then ok. U better come like U on hores steroids if U wanna beat me. uppen Ur verse entirely, punches make em more direct, personal make em, not so stupid. flow, work on it. U get a 4 out of 10

I shot Ya, U was a lil better than Geebs, U started good at the beginning but it seems like u aint care at the middle and end. U started falling off there. Ur lines were strechted a lil and dis is why Ur structure and flow need help. U did alright, I almost had the ergd to ask U if U wanted to join my crew. U was alright, just need to elivate a bit. mad props for the first few lines. U get a 6 out of 10.

V/ I shot Ya.
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