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Old 02-04-05, 04:10 PM   #1
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My lyrics were born to take a physical form/
this ain't ya average poem i grab a mic and do harm/
I'm like a poisonous drug when i'm reciting i pour/
lyrics like venom escape the mic chords/
causing mass hysteria for this i'm preparing ya/
ya better mask up or either leave the area/
cause i'm gonna kick shit with pains inflicted/
a smooth motherfuka and thats how i'm depicted/
a lyrical fiend i'll tell ya what that means/
i got the skills that keen for fuking up the scene/
and i'll tip the balances against the challenges/
better then average so i show them what damage is/

Feedback Please!


freestyle(feedback)
pimpin-eh

Last edited by Blackstone : 02-04-05 at 04:14 PM. Reason: add on
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Old 02-07-05, 04:04 PM   #2
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uppin for feed back trying to improve!
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Old 02-07-05, 04:52 PM   #3
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really good especially for bein a newbie could tell u did this elseware had alot of multi's which really grabs all the homies attention but u coulda made it a lil longer cuz it was kinda short keep it up holmes and peep mine it's called "complicated Freestyle" the title might not be much but the lyrics are tight in my personal opinion but just leave your most god honest feedback no fake kissin up shit like some people like ta do
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Old 02-07-05, 05:10 PM   #4
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its str8...i like the flow
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