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09-27-05, 05:04 AM | #1 | |||||||
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If I Had, Word True Hip Hop, The One And Only Ponders On The Beat
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yo this is a rough draft of a song im in the process of making, its the whole song but i got to re record it i was just focusing on the chorus becuase ig ot several choruses written for this and this is the one i chose and want to know what you guys think of the song before i re reocrd it, and my Cousin POnders aka DJ Raymo is on the beat one of his first beats on his new Motif, word
aight yo leave some real feed back the song is called IF I HAD http://www.soundclick.com/djemsce i left feed back on these songs http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=209838 nice lil track with my boy implicit singing on it http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=209853 ausstrialian guy, word aussie hip hop Last edited by Status : 09-27-05 at 05:08 AM. |
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09-27-05, 05:42 PM | #2 | |||||||
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damn yo i left feed on songs why aint no one returing the fuckng favor
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09-27-05, 07:05 PM | #3 | ||||
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beat is dope but aint really my style, the chorus is so-so , i love this track seriously, you got a good flow, vocals are low sometimes, but pretty good quality, love the way you traught your lyrics on the beat, just work on your chorus .::.Speats.::. |
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09-27-05, 07:56 PM | #4 | |||
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nice beat...smooth...
ur flow is good...presence cud be larger on the beat though delivery could be better nice lyrics though...real mostly not a bad track dawg 1 |
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09-27-05, 08:01 PM | #5 | |||||||
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word its just the rough draft i know the things that are wrong and could be better just wanted to know what you think, and thanks for the feedback tho, and what could b e changed with the chorus?
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09-28-05, 11:24 PM | #6 | |||||||
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uppin for poeple to hear speats beat.. and shit
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10-06-05, 10:19 PM | #7 | |||||||
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yo cmon yo this is the shit...wtf i will rtf
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