8-12 lines..u spit first check in and spit when u ready

yeah thats right im just a newbe to this game
but after this i will be in canton the hall of fame
i spit until im blue in the face
doesnt matter my race
yeah thats right im wonder bread
but some say i rap like 5-0
i rip on you and your skanky ass ho
this battle is just one big enialation
im a hitman bitch this is my assasination
after im done with you you'll wish you werent here
cause im a hick ride my tractor on you like john deer
you probably never even heard this type of lyrical insanity
SHIT my rhymes are soo good i dont even need profanity
after i drop this i will be famous
so now you know what my name is...

RED DOT

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record~9-2 (6 ko'z)

shit i messed up on that wonder bread stuff

it should be

yeah thats right im wonder bread
im killing these gangsta'z like ted (bundy)

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record~9-2 (6 ko'z)

u new to dis game/
i can tell yo rhymes r lame/
im a vet when it come to spittin/
he sound like he shittin/
while i poppin 9's/
u aint droppin lines/
i dropped six shots in ur spine/
look like road kill/
u aint got no skill/

man you got nerve to talk about the shit i dropped
your lines are two words

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record~9-2 (6 ko'z)

vote on this so i can prove to this beginner that his rhymes are weak

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record~9-2 (6 ko'z)

will somebody please vote on this i want to see who won this

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record~9-2 (6 ko'z)

wow check this, check this

this was pretty one sided
balla: yuo need to work a little more, you rhymes were pretty weak

reddot: yours were pretty good, i definetly think you shouldve went wiht the ted bundy. you rhymed pretty hard. nice job

my vote: reddot

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check out these battles:

me vs westbankahradah

me vs froboy

yo reddot and balla im waitin for u to send me a private message wen u ready to battle me

Are You Fucking Joking? HArd Hits? I've seen harder hits at pillow fights! Damn Playa.

Reddot you had ok sstructure and one weak punch. WEAK FLOW AND PUNCHES GET SUM PERSONALLS DAMMIT.

Balla YOu jsut sucked nutz alltogther. Liek 3 word lines. Generic and stor baught. YOu prolly wrote them at recess.

And WHitedice you are from his hometown, Ya might want to explain more if ya don't want to get called on Dick Ridin

Reddot-3/10
Blla-1/10

Aiight Peace adn Props Return da favor in ma sig

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this battle was really weak

vote goes to reddot though cause he had more to his verse, had the bigger vocab and everything else. i dont know what balla was thinkin but that wasn't a verse, that was like 3 words put together

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lets uppin on votes dawg........................

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record~9-2 (6 ko'z)

battle was weak as fuck

barely any punches for any of ya'll structure for reddot06 wasn't good same for balla69 flow was shitty & balla69 you ain't come hard ain't all reddot06
took this shit without even breaking a sweat fo real dawg

vote goes to: reddot06

vote on mine honest vote aight: http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=125133

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Damn man aaight..

Balla-first thing expand you vocab. use more than two rhymin words
second make your sentences longer you will never win spittin that small shit and it will be surprising if you dont get KO'd.

REDDOT-your verse was alot nicer than his but next time use some personals and more than 2 rhymin words aaight???

V/Reddot

return tha fava http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=123696<<this one and the one at the bottom on my signature

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