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Rules......

15-20 Lines
First to 5 Votes Wins
3-0 K.O.

Do You wanna go first?

yeah, i'll spit first

Verse Due in 30 Mins.

Ill Spit Mine within 30 Mins as well

eh yo,

this wack rapper, he prolly gonna claim his mic is broken
"but there ain't no mic", stop bitchin and start postin
you talk a lot of shit, but really you're soft spoken
you don't want it, what the fuck are you smokin
you wanna battle? well i'm ready to butt heads,
i kno i'm hard for you to digest, but you need to be fed
fuck around with me? heh....i'll feed you lead
you claim you're slept on? cat please, go to bed
when i see you, there's gonna be blood shed
i hope rappin ain't your day job, you'll be beggin for bread
i can't believe you made it here, you must of cheated your post
i'm a lot nicer than you, honestly, not to brag and boast
Hey Everyone, this ain't a battle, its a Wieney roast
but we all know that billy is into SAUSAGE PARTIES
he fucked a guy named marty, and blamed it on the bacardi
liar, you know you ain't his asshole like it was hearty
i know you want me to flip it, cause i have an interestin style
i can't believe i accepted this battle, you ain't worthwhile
i battled your type already, i got you on file
you prolly learned how to battle from watchin 8mile
you should take all your rhymes and make a pile
light a fuckin match and then wait awhile
and then maybe when the smoke is cleared,
you can pick you're pride up, and go find a career
because, i'm a diamond in the ruff, really a rare find
i do this for myself, i just like to rhyme
fuck you billy, and fuck a punchline
i don't need IT to win, i can end this with a ___________
underline

its on you

damn typos......

liar, you know you ATE his asshole like it was hearty


not ain't


my bust

damn yo, how lond does it take you to post?

Im Tired of mutha fuckas like you claimin they can rap/
your the cat who bought 8-mile then said " I wanna do that"/
No metaphors, no wordplay, or punchlines/
Kid its crunch-time im separatin your lines like a fire drill at lunch-time/
cuttin out your salivary glands and placin them in your ears so you can listen to wut your spittin/
shits pre-written, you just typed that?.. please tell me its a joke/
i just finished typin the rules then followed that weak ass post/
dont play it off, desperate for a win like a fiend for a hit/
wut? did you run out of toilet paper so u used that, cause all you wrote was shit/
Your brain must be like a robbed register, its senseless/
did you jog on your paper cause your wrote alot of run-on sentences/
with your references about homos makes me question your preferences/
and you mention this?!?! a diamond in the ruff, a rare find/
more like a flee in a muff ,an irritating kind/
You should of ended yours with some kind of punchline, do you know wut one is?/
Probably not, but go to wackness emergency for a lil assisstance on it/

uppin for votes

votes please

hmmm . . .





Spry went 8 lines over the bar limit.


Billy went 19 minutes over the time limit.



Not considering the fact that you both basically disqualifyed yourselves, Billy took this battle with more punchlines and better flow.

::No metaphors, no wordplay, or punchlines/
Kid its crunch-time im separatin your lines like a fire drill at lunch-time/

::Your brain must be like a robbed register, its senseless/
did you jog on your paper cause your wrote alot of run-on sentences/

Billy beat your whole battle with just these lines.

::he fucked a guy named marty, and blamed it on the bacardi

I can almost swear on my life I heard that line before somewhere, but I have no proof so don't sweat it.

::fuck you billy, and fuck a punchline
i don't need IT to win, i can end this with a ___________
underline

^nice concept, but unfortunately its not true. You do need punchlines to win battles, cause thats what battles are.

Alright rhymes Spry. No punches. Alright flow. To many homo references.


Keep it up y'all.


Return the favor please, and both of you vote on my battle with Rtikulate:::::::http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=35971

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The Soul Purpose LP . . . Summer '04

yeah billy did come on strong, but i thought i was better......i forgot to count my lines, my bust for going over.... but going over the time limit is a lot worse if you ask me.


good battle billy