Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 100

Check in by: 08-28-04 at 01:54 PM

Must drop verse in 15 minutes after check in.

yo how about 10 lines mayne is ya down with that

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SEE THAT EMPIRE WERD~!

P.S.A

COMING SOON-GODS BETRAYL
OUT NOW-THE SLEEP & THE DREAM

yeah 10 lines is ok...i meant to put 10 lines max that my bad

its all good lets go

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THE SLEEP & THE DREAM-

SEE THAT EMPIRE WERD~!

P.S.A

COMING SOON-GODS BETRAYL
OUT NOW-THE SLEEP & THE DREAM

word 10 line...you aight with that? Lets do it.

QBsmasher has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-28-04 01:27 PM.

DrasticMeasureZ has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-28-04 01:30 PM.

When I drop the verse, Ill leave this DJ without a clue
Lets see if he can swizz beats and drag on with a bar or two
I dont even have to throw head shots, I just ribbed you homie
Your whole verse will probably sound like a tribute towards me
If this dude was raw, I just cooked him cause he got cracked on
He aint throwin punches, he blows more heads than a beauty salon
Wannabe Emcees use me as their guiding light like the north star
Thats why for years i been crashing them into reifs and sand bars
Allow me to "slide" in and dialte your "iris" with my lyrical fame
This "black balloon" is a "long way down" and noone knows his "name"*

*The quotations are 5 goo goo dolls songs.

Punches right n' left, disect your spine~n~neck, it's like 'poachers-against-humane-society' how I be 'killin~this~VET' // 1 (Rated R.I.P)
Ya knees shakin' nervous, I be feedin' on earth's surface, I'm on your 'girl' like 'gynecologist', Dr. drastic at your 'cervix'//2(service...haha)
My word's~purpose to serve this verse~perfect, to hit~wit~shit~viscous, so 'sick' that I got the nurse~workin//3
Verbs and wordplay, inflate murder-rates, de-face you wit words like 'cerebral adhesives' cuz they 'stick to ya brain' and decay//4
You might as well 'cuff~my~ventricles' to put me in 'cardiac~arrest', cuz at your rate... you battlin me like you 'missed~dracula', a 'mis~stake'//5(stake to kill dracula)
You'd need to 'ignite~carosine~vomit' just to 'spit~yaself~a~flame' and need to buy Hip Hop Edition Scrabble just to 'give~yourself~a~name'//6
Breakin' my 'paintings' the only way you bend my 'frame', you'd prob go as far as cuttin yaself in '16 bits' and claim ya 'in~the~game'//7(16 bit video game...Sega?)
You 'angered' my verbs and lines, so they swingin punches and red-faced, that's what I call mad rhymes//8
Your victory be denied, with these lines you'd need to put '___________' many times to get me closer to 'flatlines'//9(heart rate machine)
Call me the 'merk~doner', you lost bitch own~up, your rhymes so 'shit' I didn't really think that 'HTML' code could also submit such a bad 'aroma'//10

Voted For: DrasticMeasureZ

punches: dm
personals: none
multis: dm
metas:dm
vocab: dm
complexity: dm

vote: dm

hey no beef but he came really hard......an dit was kinda one sided

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damn cuz lol....you wrote that all last week huh. All kinda crazy lines and slashes and dashes and shit...ha ha here you go.

Take out the dashes, hacks, slashes and underlines your left with little content
You know QB smashes, hacks, bashes, and sends this Virgin vet to the convent

i kinda like that mayne i dont know theres somthin wrong with me by using different style ok i'll take da slahes and da bashes out mayne

~peace~

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THE SLEEP & THE DREAM-

SEE THAT EMPIRE WERD~!

P.S.A

COMING SOON-GODS BETRAYL
OUT NOW-THE SLEEP & THE DREAM

Voted For: DrasticMeasureZ

its ova drastic took it love da wordplay ya fuckin rhyme schemes were hott(the csrabble shit was bangin) u changin ya style and gettin better who eva givin u tips mayne give em props cuz its workin drastic got dis one

qb smasher u was iight but ya wrds were s0o simple u used the wrd two compared to his gynacologist and thas jus one wrd drastic won

vote=drastic

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lol yeah cause i freestyled...he wrote that shit all last week...imma get this DQed...dude be cheatin too much.