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Old 08-31-07, 03:34 AM   #1
Clownaround
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Cypher

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i was tryin to post this under "cypher" but it didnt let me, maybe cus im new. idk but im just tryin to have a real cypher. alright.

yo i keep it fresh like old spice/
never rotten like old rice/
never forgotten like gold advice/
keepin your views amused like homeless fights/
in the middle of the night/
so why fight/
when you can just chill/
dont talk about poppin pills/
and payin bills/
or makin mills/
cus "i tell you what" like the king of the hill/
just keepin it real/
as i sit and daydream/
and all i need/
are some clothes, the city of the rose, and a lil bit o weed/

dont diss my shit, even if its wack/ you might have come to say crap/
but i just came to rap/ so just relax.. for some time, and please just kick back and deliver some rhymes
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Old 09-03-07, 10:28 PM   #2
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for a small cypher verse it sounded nice when i was reading it....sounds like the beginning lines to a freestyle verse that could be worked on....but u said it was suppose to be in the cypher section as a cypher so i give u that....i would like to see a keystyle verse like 10-20 lines in the open mics though with some creativity put in it.....~1~
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