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08-31-07, 03:34 AM | #1 | ||
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Cypher
IP:
i was tryin to post this under "cypher" but it didnt let me, maybe cus im new. idk but im just tryin to have a real cypher. alright.
yo i keep it fresh like old spice/ never rotten like old rice/ never forgotten like gold advice/ keepin your views amused like homeless fights/ in the middle of the night/ so why fight/ when you can just chill/ dont talk about poppin pills/ and payin bills/ or makin mills/ cus "i tell you what" like the king of the hill/ just keepin it real/ as i sit and daydream/ and all i need/ are some clothes, the city of the rose, and a lil bit o weed/ dont diss my shit, even if its wack/ you might have come to say crap/ but i just came to rap/ so just relax.. for some time, and please just kick back and deliver some rhymes |
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09-03-07, 10:28 PM | #2 | |
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IP:
for a small cypher verse it sounded nice when i was reading it....sounds like the beginning lines to a freestyle verse that could be worked on....but u said it was suppose to be in the cypher section as a cypher so i give u that....i would like to see a keystyle verse like 10-20 lines in the open mics though with some creativity put in it.....~1~
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