okay

your my first prority on top of my shit list/
no dick ridin i thought you loved that shit

you'll turn around and see me wit a meat cleaver/
but dont bite my style just bite my big weiner

im like a magican and your one of my "tricks"/
you not a chick your a dude and you just got fixed

your on a frozen pond walkin on thin ice/
ya hair so thin you gotta comb it wit rice

i seen ya pic you kinda cute i'll admitt it/
bitch slapp you so hard you gonna need a parametic

so if you would please merk me i'm fuckin beggin you/
talk about how im white cuz it would be the last thing you ever do

turn around samack you to the ground/
watch you go down what the fuck you got to say now

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sorry but had to say it no disrespect

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Haha' .. Sorry Forgot About This Battle' !!!

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Alright This Going To Be Some Shit!! Ah Ha' ... Alright Checcking In Let Me Drop Some' .. Weak-Shit!!!!!!!!!!!

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Insecurity Is 'Japeto' When You Try To 'Be-Cool',/
I Can See Why You Get No Pussy, Beside Dick 'Making-You-Drool',/
When Cops Stop This Loser He 'Gets-Directions',/
To Leave The Hood, Pigs Usually Show 'Great-Affection',/
For Their Kind, That's Why You Always 'Answer-Questions',/
5.0 Blinks And You Drown In Your 'Own-Confessions',/
U Aint Street Ur Just A Tony Hawk Fan A Parody Man Drugy a FuckingMistake,/
Your Hood Connections Are Up To Par With 'Justin-Timberlake',/
Boy Bands Pussy Can Never 'Cross-Over',/
And ACt Like Their Tough And Completely 'Gloss-Over',/
The Fact That The Nerve You Hit Was Up In 'Fred-Sphincter',/
You Tongued Your Dog Like It Was Your 'Last-Dinner',/
Don't Be Ashamed You're Not The First To Come Out 'The-Closet',/
Fred Is Happy That You're His Official 'Sperm-Deposit',/
I Figured You Out I Told You To Be Yourself,/
This Drug Dealer Madd Hater Is Played, Is This A 'Cry-For-Help',/

Checcckity Checck Checck - - -

Daddy Didnt Give You A 'Perche-This-Week'?/
Is He Ashamed That His Son Looks Like A 'Total-Geek?',/
Blame Your Genetics Cause Physcology 'Completely-Reeks',/
Of A Coward Faking Toughness, You Could 'Never-Speak',/
You're Just A Lonely Fan Madd Hatter Fuck That 'Thug-Image',/
You Crackers Swear Your Hip-Hop Yet Ya Never Ever 'Scrimmage',/

Aint That Some Shit!! ' .. Ah Ha Nah Im Finished' !!!!

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Alright Uppppppppppppppppppin This Shit 4 Votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Aight check it... DP has this one. Mad, you had 7 bars, and a couple were just terrible. The first... an ok intro I guess but saying a chick likes dickriding... is well.. not saying much. Your second bar just sounds silly.. "weiner" is something 2nd graders say. Your third bar was really your only good punch of the battle, nice wordplay. Then you call her cute, which is totally not relevent to the parametic line... try using a setup or something. THen you closed without a real punch. Weak verse overall.. gotta work on using set up lines and hitting with hard punches instead of just filler.

DP, your verse was also pretty weak... the Fred lines toward the end had some nice punches but I just felt like you were lacking early. The problem was almost every punch wrapped and it mest up the flow pretty bad, then you started stretching lines. As usual though, you had very nice original rhymes, and you did have more punches than MH, so you get the vote.

Give honest vote on the battle in my sig.

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RIP SMOKAJOKA WE WILL MiSS YOU!!!!!!

^^Lmfao I Said I Was Droppin "Weak-Shit" ...!!!!!!!!! Sorry If You Didn't Feel Mah Shit

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Ya'll Drop some Honest Votes On This Shit And I Will Return The Favor Most Deff. No Matter Who You Vote For!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Thanks

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How about return the favor on my battle....

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RIP SMOKAJOKA WE WILL MiSS YOU!!!!!!

your my first prority on top of my shit list/
no dick ridin i thought you loved that shit
(Not startin as much of a punch....and a bit played second half...but coo....okey opener...6/10)

you'll turn around and see me wit a meat cleaver/
but dont bite my style just bite my big weiner
(Okey this one is just plain shit...sorry but..its not a punch...more of a confesion you`re a big moron..2/10)

im like a magican and your one of my "tricks"/
you not a chick your a dude and you just got fixed
(You started good but again fucked in the next line...nice wordplay in first,....6/10)

your on a frozen pond walkin on thin ice/
ya hair so thin you gotta comb it wit rice
(This aint a punch....this is a madafakin poem....2/10)

i seen ya pic you kinda cute i'll admitt it/
bitch slapp you so hard you gonna need a parametic
(this one is tryin to be a punch...but still its patethic...3/10)

so if you would please merk me i'm fuckin beggin you/
talk about how im white cuz it would be the last thing you ever do
(Okey being sarcastic in the first line....but you fucked up the second one....4/10)

turn around samack you to the ground/
watch you go down what the fuck you got to say now
(Again a terrible closer.....this was real weak shit.....2/10)


Overall: 25 / 70

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Insecurity Is 'Japeto' When You Try To 'Be-Cool',/
I Can See Why You Get No Pussy, Beside Dick 'Making-You-Drool',/
(Okey somhow i dont understand this oppener....but still beats the shit out of Mad Hatters one...7/10)
When Cops Stop This Loser He 'Gets-Directions',/
To Leave The Hood, Pigs Usually Show 'Great-Affection',/
For Their Kind, That's Why You Always 'Answer-Questions',/
5.0 Blinks And You Drown In Your 'Own-Confessions',/
(To much poetic...and you dissin the cops...not him...5/10
U Aint Street Ur Just A Tony Hawk Fan A Parody Man Drugy a FuckingMistake,/
Your Hood Connections Are Up To Par With 'Justin-Timberlake',/
(Started out nice...went into good....finished as OK punch..7/10)
Boy Bands Pussy Can Never 'Cross-Over',/
And ACt Like Their Tough And Completely 'Gloss-Over',/
(Weak punch....no agression....not much of a multi....5/10)
The Fact That The Nerve You Hit Was Up In 'Fred-Sphincter',/
You Tongued Your Dog Like It Was Your 'Last-Dinner',/
(Liked this one....specially the second part...nasty shit...7/10)
Don't Be Ashamed You're Not The First To Come Out 'The-Closet',/
Fred Is Happy That You're His Official 'Sperm-Deposit',/
(Okey again a weak punch that lighthens up right at the end....5/10)
I Figured You Out I Told You To Be Yourself,/
This Drug Dealer Madd Hater Is Played, Is This A 'Cry-For-Help',/
(Coo....nothin much.....dont know why the drug dealer input... 5/10

Checcckity Checck Checck - - -

Daddy Didnt Give You A 'Perche-This-Week'?/
Is He Ashamed That His Son Looks Like A 'Total-Geek?',/
Blame Your Genetics Cause Physcology 'Completely-Reeks',/
Of A Coward Faking Toughness, You Could 'Never-Speak',/
(Dayum...this is where you got what i wanted.....spittin faya...nice worplay...punch is good....multi works for me......8/10
You're Just A Lonely Fan Madd Hatter Fuck That 'Thug-Image',/
You Crackers Swear Your Hip-Hop Yet Ya Never Ever 'Scrimmage',/
(Dont understand the ending....but a better finisher than Hatters...5/10)



Overall: 49 /90
Overall *: 38/70


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Mah wote: DP

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These muthafakaza could never achive what I accomplished!

Thank Ya Thank Ya Hades' .. Thank Ya Thank Ya Shadows edge!!!!!


Uppppppppppppppin 4 Votessssssss

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ya shit ws funny and i dont laugh much. shadow edge hey just wanted her to know that she's hot it's a guy thing but you would'nt know about that now would you

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Awww Thanks Madd Hatter!! Im Sorry About' ... Writing All That Shit Bout You!! Ah Ha' ... LoL

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