heres somethin for ya'll haters


want a peice of mind... you'll get a peice of mine...
or get of peice of yours.. when this peice reclines...
you believe whats written... then believe in mine...
if not then you can just read between the lines...





freshened jewels, necklace cools when im sposed to be reminiscin,
these federals are checkin tools not knowin the definition,
exit wounds from specials dude exposin a section missin,
hectic moods, express it through reloadin the ammunition,
purchase tombs for certain dudes who flowin and ramble shit with,
my name involved, the game is solved when i open a can of kickin,
my brain revolves, around aresol, hopin to ram with sickness,
intent to destroy, its ya boy, im scopin to handle business,
Got some homies to be the witness, you gotta be on my shitlist?
Better yet, i'll get this tech, and jot you onto my hitlist,
you cocky son of a bitches, have got to be only kiddin,
what you spazzin? Whats ya address? drop me off at his buildin,
Poppin open his lid with, glocks and tommys for snitches,
Not to be focusin fiction, but hes says he'll body some bitches,
Im cocky as shit with, this ryhthym thats got to be twisted,
Wait im not finished cause i just fuckin forgot what im spittin...


want a peice of mind... you'll get a peice of mine...
or get of peice of yours.. when this peice reclines...
you believe whats written... then believe in mine...
if not then you can just read between the lines...


you don't need MarVjay to tell you the massacres comin,
that bitch is trippin over himself like hes backwards and runnin,
that ass is blasted, body bags all over after the gunnin,
when i run out of ammunition, ima stab him with somethin,
i hope your never type my name, stop poppin ya gums,
or i'll have ya girl screamin my name at the top of her lungs...


whoa whoa whoa.... lemme start over...


boggle ya mind, unstopable ryhmes, tuckin matics,
topicals fine, but usually i prefer punchin faggots,
respond to my lines, then i'll have to rest ya breath,
i've been pronounced legally dead cause im fresh to death,
rep this set unstoppably, better respect my text,
i been dropped flames, ya'll just slept and slept,
elected best canidate it succeed in this hip hop game,
I stick with Onestep.. its funny how ya'll flip flop names,
Fo-fifths pop brains, you puttin taunts in ya statements,
ya'll wanna rap street? i'll splatter thoughts on the pavement,
you nerds fainted when i degrate your words player,
i'll pop at you, cause i cock-the-twos.. like a bird trainer,
Im finished with this shit, so go ahead and award us,
cause ain't shit left to say other than chorus...


want a peice of mind... you'll get a peice of mine...
or get of peice of yours.. when this peice reclines...
you believe whats written... then believe in mine...
if not then you can just read between the lines...

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lol, not too concerned with the beef and what not, but ya had some funny ones in there, like the running backwards line, witty with it.

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i wasn't even dissin anybody except that little part about marv-jay but thanks for the feed

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LMAO this shit was pretty hot.. i mean i was feeling this alot.. and not too many OM's im really feeling out there.. but dawg.. this piece was nice.. u came with the fire.. nice witty lines in there.. good flow and structure the whole way thru.. good job man..!!

GET ON AIM NIGGA!!!...get at me

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yo that was some hott shit yo got dat fire, see you used the hook we were gonna use in the collab that cool, that cool...i was really feeln that hook too and the verses u comin like a po emcee man...keep it up 8.5/10

shit was dope. i was feelin it...nice shit...keep this shit up fam...9/10...flow was on point, and rhyming was hard...keep elevating

NOK is here bitches... we da hottest crew droppin OM's right now, if u dont believe me, check tha sig bitches....NOK is where its at...

~1~

shit was a hot open mic good style real easy to follow yer flow got tha beat in my mind soon as i read dat shit good shit man

uppin.............................................

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http://community.rapverse.com/showp...99&postcount=10
theres my dfeed i.e.

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Damn...this shit was really good man...Feeling the rhyme scheme, had some creative wordplay in there, nice metas, flow was on point throughout, all-n-all, good shit man...We should collab sometime...If you down for that, holla at me thru aim and we can discuss a topic...

aim: rapdemon

thanks and aight, i'll get with you for a collab..

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good piece, i was feeling it alot so overall it is 9.5/10 good vocab, nice structure, sum metaphors & a few multis great keep up the good work