aiight, this is something I had to do for a project. If you usin' lo-fi, SC fucks up volume, so vocals might be low, but fuck it.

anyways I left feed on
Carson "don't address me"
and Q "so Long"

aiight here it is:

This Is Rap's History *copyin' Carson *

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uppp...........................

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ok beat is maddddddddd played hook is kinda old school which helps the song lyrics couldve been better but were ok this topics been done a million times also but still ok a 6/10

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How ya copy'in me?

I like this beat always have....
Its played as hell, but who gives a flyin fuck....

I like your flow alot on this. Nice delivery,
Took your time on this one.

Only thing I can say is.....Volume up ya vocal's....
I can tell your elevatein....Thats good.
Gets some NON COMMERCIAL BEATS NOW.

flow was alot more on point the you ussually are...good shit...kinda corny in parts...and some parts weren't correct.

good shit though...keep puttin out songs.

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I was copyin' you by how I did my link wit the bold shit. but it don't matter. lol

anyways, thanks for all the feed, I appreciate it. And it is for a project I was doin' at school, I jus wanted to add in a song. So the writing, I could have done more of and spent time on more, but meh... anyways, thanks again. upp....

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Yeah Dope Drop SPuL.

Flow was nice, coulda done with bein a bit louder but yeh...

Pretty Dope Track

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Pretty much what every one else has said...

BUT damn spul you improved a lot.. like A LOT.. I remember last time I heard one of your tracks I didnt like it.. had no emotion, no flow, shitty quality..

youre HELLA better... keep it up

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^LOL... damn, yo. but lol thanks. remember the name of that track by any chance? lol

but thanks for all the feed by everyone. appreciate it. upp....

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i listened on Lo FI and the quality was EH...

flow is on...


delivery is fine, if not monotonous


needs more emotion


good joint though



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damn been awhile sense ive heard something from you spul but shit i can see youve been elevating good job...i liked how your flow is different then most peoples on rv...you got talent lots infact....keep doing your thing cuz this was prob one of the better ones ive heard from you your chorus was even pretty good, good job..

pz..

-Parallel

thanks, man. Can't wait to show it in school. uppin'.........

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flow is on, good concept, couldve went more into the pioneers, maybe talked about breakers, grafitti artists, etc.... turn up your vocals. keep elevating

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I had to get a new couch, but as you can see the fun continues!

A.I.

aiight thx for feed, i updated it wit better hook.

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