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10-02-06, 04:42 PM | #1 | |||
Poet's Daughter.
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Kiss The Darkness
IP: F7F5 E56C
I knew what I was getting myself into sucking in its passion of lust inhaling the death tube. The plague making my heart very vague Christians don't want to see me like opposite of day. it was the night when my mom wasn't home working two jobs trying to shed light in this dark dome sitting in the room with my best friend Karen writing a poem-just unleashing my tight barren emotions being bottled up, tired of being poor and I'm getting irritated with the yelling next door. Heard a lock unlatching, means momma is home, rustle of a baggage-she went and got grocery I smell foul booze, oh here comes the misery. Faces on the wall and they see everything while I can't, but hear the pain and suffering. Karen looks up at my face, she see's the fear like positive and negative attracts-she comes near. Holds my arms thinking that I'm going to blow up, my eyes ticking and ready to bomb those teary suds. They're dishing it out, death is about to be served or have left over with mom on the ground hurt. Put my face on Karen shoulders-this is hard to bare I'm naked for peace and I don’t have any clothes to wear. Lightning hits the cords and shuts off the lights then a thunder explodes through the illuminated night. Foul odor sneaks up my nose and twinge my lungs, wetness on my lips and my eye see's a tongue it was Karen’s, mumbling- "Don't be scared" and for the first time, I felt comfortable in my life, I swear. It seems that all the problems of despair has disappeared in the, non-tasteless and seeing, air. We both got spooked, hearing the knob turning lights came on, and my mom standing there with a gun in her hand, smoke escaping as if its burning. On that same night, I found something that I'll cherish & never regret, I found peace and Love while I was being perished. As the time went on, I’ve knew I kissed darkness Cause my life is fucked, as a living carcass and god abortionist
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10-02-06, 04:51 PM | #2 | |||||
scotia's finest
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IP: EA03 FBCE
leave fucking linkz..............................
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10-04-06, 12:38 PM | #3 | ||||||
New to RV
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IP: 6E7E BC73
This was for the RSTL, right Lola? I read it this week actually, this is Baron Mynd - possibly the RSTL champion come the end of this week- This was a nice read though. first Ive read from youI bedlieve. Very well written. You've a lot of potential, could use a little tweaking here and there, but yeah- not bad by any means. Im impressed.
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10-04-06, 02:47 PM | #4 | |||||
scotia's finest
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IP: EA03 FBCE
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