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View Poll Results: Who had a better verse? | |||
Kein Witz | 0 | 0% | |
C-Bo | 5 | 100.00% | |
Voters: 5. You may not vote on this poll |
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12-06-04, 06:00 PM | #1 | |
...Simply The Best
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C-Bo vs Kein Witz
IP: 0825 899A
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20 Lines Max No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Topic-the day it all changed Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 12-07-04 at 06:00 PM Must drop verse in 1440 minutes after check in. Old / expired battle win-close |
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12-06-04, 06:01 PM | #2 | |
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IP: 0825 899A
C-Bo has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-06-04 06:01 PM.
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12-06-04, 06:09 PM | #3 | |
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IP: 3240 794D
Kein Witz has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-06-04 06:09 PM.
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12-06-04, 06:39 PM | #4 |
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IP: 3240 794D
The Day it All Changed...
Eyes closed, grasping the nightlight sleep merely. Alone trying not to see who's in the seat near me. My thoughts reap tyranny and darkness owns the scenery. The lights were out and night was feeling free. Looked to see who's seeing me, only saw my shadow. Couldn't believe the meaning but I had to know... Mourned a sad show like the black crow on my shoulders; It told stories with cold verbs and high smoulders. He was straight forward with rolled curves telling fears, Insight was his forte his words had me expelling tears. Mentally awkward and weird, needing expected rest. It's becoming too intense wrecking this perfect mess; The thoughts turned reality within a search for stress. I looked for home as birds perched nests, murking sense. A faltered mind transformed lurking pest in need of a-cid; I died three weeks ago, coincide my last wish. Shattered my image, end life with cursed fists Martyr the birth less, coincide my first wish... |
12-06-04, 06:44 PM | #5 | |
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IP: 3240 794D
this is crazy, the comfort that ive owned, it is fading
somethings changed, its coldness now, the warmth is invaded im being taken from my nest and my love and enjoyment hands grip me like a pencil, my struggling is pointless somethings pulling me away, so much pressure and grinding and on release, im blinded, stabbing lights strike my iris and now that i reached where it is that im getting to im having trouble breathing and the pain is unbearable and once i catch my breathe all i do is act hysterical and look around and see all these people that i never knew so they all hold me down, now i know theres a problem cause one of them is cutting me with a sharpened object now i know that they cut me, i can tell somethings missing but my bodys been numb from all this shit that its witnessed they put me in some strange clothes, bring me to a new place its like a whole new world, but everything exudes hate and after years of misery with everything thats wrong i still curse that day, man... that day that i was born
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12-06-04, 06:53 PM | #6 |
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IP: 3240 794D
MILK!
Good drop. Ready 4 votes. Or else I'll eat your baby. |
12-07-04, 02:53 PM | #7 | |
...Simply The Best
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IP: 0825 899A
come on yall...................................any votes?
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12-07-04, 04:03 PM | #8 |
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IP: 3240 794D
Uppin'............................................
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12-07-04, 10:00 PM | #9 | |
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IP: 28AD 5545
uppin again............................................
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12-07-04, 10:25 PM | #10 | |
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IP: C215 A607
Voted For: C-Bo
I gotta say...aight topical battle, but 20 lines is too short... C-Bo's rhymes, well some of them dont rhyme, but I believe it edged kein's with the vocab and it's incitefulness, both verses flowed just fine and both verse's structure was good. I do think both of you guys can improve on some of the stretched lines though. Overall C-Bo gets my vote with overall a more inciteful verse. Though both of you did a good job.
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12-08-04, 03:48 PM | #11 | |
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IP: 28AD 5545
thanx for votin........................................i'm up 1-0............uppin
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12-08-04, 05:46 PM | #12 |
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IP: 3240 794D
^ Seriously too short. I had a whole story down, and then I saw the limit...
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12-12-04, 11:02 AM | #13 | |
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IP: 7BE2 A0A1
Voted For: Kein Witz
This was an overall good batle but im goin to have to give this one to .......... I really like the flow to both verses there was a nice touch to C-BO flow but it still could have been a little better with the wordplay, Nice sructure to both verses, KEVIN had some GREAT line too i really liked his flow but ur metas werent visible but punchlines were sick nice battle -Please return the favor on my battle I know its a lil weak but its ok Please return the favor http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=163680 Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.
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12-14-04, 11:38 PM | #14 | |
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IP: 28AD 5545
...........................uppin.................. ...........
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12-18-04, 10:51 AM | #15 |
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IP: 0825 899A
Alright, Uppin' this piece........................
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