nike.

and lets go 12lines, is that fine?

my links*

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2803765
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2803775
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2805133
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2805861

check...

linkage
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2804103
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2804105
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=232189

Look ima drop early and first, cuz i aint got time for you later on. so here's 12...

Listen bitch, ima boss who gets props for slayin these wacks
Cuz ya raps fuckin shitty, like prostitutes sexing the ass
its funny how ya dislike the tourny...engage the shotty
Have ya disembodied, so fucka stretcher
...I'll expand ya whole body
See man ya skills equal nothing, i'll saw off ya limbs
Leave Mal like engineers with the tools
....but no ability to use them
Faggot, only bump in the road u get is genitle warts
Cuz Beating u was a nail in the coffin,
...Like 6 feet deep fuckin a corpse


*finishing this faggot*

After i beat u, ima leave ya black n bold like title headings
Cuz i'm ringin this faggot,
....so fuck ya gay writes like homo weddings
& ya my punches miss you...Mal, they use to hittin ya face
It's walk n the park, so Mal drops hard...
...only cuz he forgot to tie his shoe lace (lol)

BITCH!!!

After i beat u, ima leave ya black n bold like title headings
Cuz i'm ringin this faggot,
....so fuck ya gay writes like homo weddings

^only one i liked... barley.

Ken - wtf, ok first of all ..your problem is you use the word "like" as a comparison way too much. "like" disses aren't really that creative, and can result in many ways. cuz you could've said "like homo weddings" or "like homos getting married" or "like faggots protesting" ...and since it can resuly in so many ways and probably HAS resulted in these ways, this makes it sort of basic/played. so putting the word "like" in all of your punches and always using obvious comparisons is kind've wack to me imo.

vs.

get your gettin pwned in dis battle, but i geuss im gettin an L too
Cuz see your losin the battle, and im losin respect for you

^barley a quotable. more of a statement/self respectish punch.

We all know who's more experienced, so i gots da advantage,
Mal's known for throwin rocks @ herbs...
but we already take your words for granite,

^good, but its played. i've seen it on RB like 7 times with the granite wordplay ..i've seen it on a couple other sites as well. I've heard rappers on mainstream shit even use granite wordplay. since it's not original it makes it non-creative.

Mal - meh, you came pretty original, the problem is your wording. the way you word shit is just not harsh to anyone. and dunno about here, but on RB you're too stingy and high and mighty to listen to our tips. so listen, YOU NEED TO WORK ON WORDING! be more harsh/direct. be meaner to the opponent. cuss @ the dumbfucks. be aggressive! re-read your lines and ask yourself if they'd effect you in any way ..or if they'd sound like a lame overused diss. (also goes for ken`pho).

you guys'll get better. i got faith in ya ..just keep working on shit, take hints.

shitty battle but ..winner imo was,

v. Malicious, for more originality.

__________________
I'm the chip bitch! i got this win in the bag.

^so you think i loss cuz of me saying 'Like' to much for punches?!?

cuz thats basically the onlything you're explaining. but w/e

1-0 mal's direction

its funny how ya dislike the tourny...engage the shotty
Have ya disembodied, so fucka stretcher
...I'll expand ya whole body
After i beat u, ima leave ya black n bold like title headings
Cuz i'm ringin this faggot,
....so fuck ya gay writes like homo weddings
nice...

vs

Too Easy...

kid u been on rv forever, and nobody likes you, your the worst when,
The back of my head is the only thing lookin forward to your verses,
1st line nah, 2ed i was kinda feeling....

P.S it really wasnt that ez!!


vote: ken' pho......

__________________
NOT TO BE FUCKED WITH!!!!

its funny how ya dislike the tourny...engage the shotty
Have ya disembodied, so fucka stretcher
...I'll expand ya whole body
After i beat u, ima leave ya black n bold like title headings
Cuz i'm ringin this faggot,
....so fuck ya gay writes like homo weddings


vs


kid u been on rv forever, and nobody likes you, your the worst when,
The back of my head is the only thing lookin forward to your verses,


mal i wasnt digging the india wordplay, the granite wordplay is played
but those wouldve took the battle for you

ken chill with the like comparison you should be aiight
v/ kenpho

aight coo, 2-1 ken's direction

Nothing

vs


kid u been on rv forever, and nobody likes you, your the worst when,
The back of my head is the only thing lookin forward to your verses,

Ken had played lines the wedding line was meh but i didnt think it was worth quoting

v-Mal.

After i beat u, ima leave ya black n bold like title headings
Cuz i'm ringin this faggot,
....so fuck ya gay writes like homo weddings
vs

kid u been on rv forever, and nobody likes you, your the worst when,
The back of my head is the only thing lookin forward to your verses,
We all know who's more experienced, so i gots da advantage,
Mal's known for throwin rocks @ herbs...
but we already take your words for granite,


v-Mal.

__________________

Up over no-shows.

After i beat u, ima leave ya black n bold like title headings
Cuz i'm ringin this faggot,
....so fuck ya gay writes like homo weddings

Vs.

Nothing

Both came pretty weak - I could not find anything worth quoting in Mal's verse so...

Vote - Ken Pho