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08-23-05, 10:45 PM
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IP: 9092 4066
werrd, one of my first songs... first on soundclick
leave some feed www.soundclick.com/youngblay http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=205646 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=205630
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08-23-05, 11:05 PM
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come on lets get some feed....
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08-24-05, 12:04 AM
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IP: BA87 A0AC
blay, noone can leave feed yet...
song has to clear since you jus signed up for soundclick... itll be up 2morrow
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08-24-05, 12:09 AM
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i signed up a long time ago
u can listen to the lofi version, its like that for all new songs
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08-24-05, 12:12 AM
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Seattle Hat Wit A Lean
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IP: BA87 A0AC
oh w/e
well you sent me the track soo.... its not bad the intro is kinda ehh, could be better...or just not necessary really.. but your emotion is actually better tthan most kids on their first track, i was impressed... flow is ok, nothing that amazes me lyrically wise its str8 south, which doesnt bother me...i like southern music  so weerd man, a pretty decent job...especially for a first
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08-24-05, 12:13 AM
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werrd  yeah, forgot to tell yall this is my first. thanks Tizz
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08-24-05, 12:47 AM
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IP: 3B43 EB4A
noooooooooooooot me...lol
ill leave feed when it clears...lo-fi will fuck u all up
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08-24-05, 01:04 AM
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IP: D302 57F7
Intro HELLA lame lol no lie
delivery is bad, flow is very very very basic... lyrics not good some say southern... nut idk Listening on lo-fi so i aint gonna say ur quality is hella wack, but it needs uppn fo sho WOrk on ur shit more before you record sound like you were reading in some spots cuz i fell off and like waited for the beat to pick back up.. 3/10 Honest feed fam 1
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08-24-05, 11:53 AM
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yeah i appreciate that man
see this shit is what drives me to do more and to do better, cuz everytime i listen to it i hear where i fucked it up and what i should have done better.... and i aint lyin when i say first audio tho i had just done 1 battle before hifi has cleared now....
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08-24-05, 01:22 PM
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IP: ECB3 36A0
beats ill..
quality is not very good..vocals need 2 be put uo alot.. i think the lyrics are sick, but the delivery and emotion is lacking.. i think some of your adlibs are a bit out of time.. overall cool track.. peep my shit.. peace -1-
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