Dawgs treat me like im not real,delivering rhymes bout me like i dnt cut the deal....
but peeps will feel, me verbaly killing,lyricaly grilling MC'S,
coz my my lyrics host more victories, then a post man holds posts deliveries...
wid vouls dat crave a platinuim disc,dat pose a health risk,processing rhymes witch break necks wid ease,have God on his creative kneess,wen MC'S feel my beats they'll beg me....PLEASE!!!
but im freed by a lyrical need to feed my vouls and flow,they process garbage on me but ill neva let go.
il neva show, mercy inside, coz il outmenover it wid lyrical pride,grill MC's like bacon Fried...
il concer all my fears and climb to da top of dis hip hop montain;
ill genterate more lyrics dan water out of a fountain...
coz my rhymes will fill wid street respect,wid countless flows to select...gota go...lyricals got revenge to collect.....!!!!!!

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be kind....dis is me first open mic......!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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yo,ppl give ur opinions on dis....dis is me first open mic and need opinoins on were i'm going wrong!!!!

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