y'all might not understand this, but i do.....
if you read this like it's a poem, read by punctuation....if you read it like a flow, read it by line..

hit me w/ comments, positive or negative
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i looked myself in the face.
my heart hurt.
i looked in my wide open space and
i felt my life spurt
into this moment in time
that made me think
"i'm losin my mind."
so now i'm thinkin...
and my heart hurts.
and i'm losin my mind...
and it's too late to even
contemplate
what's goin on this time.
but i can't even help but ask myself
"why?"
and i wanna know
where it all started
goin wrong.
but then i'm like
...don't make this some sad love song...
so i look in the wide open space
to let my life spurt..
so if i look myself in the face,
my heart won't hurt...
~~~
that's my word
-bliss