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Old 01-25-04, 06:31 PM   #1
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The greatest epiphany ever

IP: 98E1 D794

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/t...sticatmusic.htm
(here is a better version but its not a MP3)

http://www.acidplanet.com/artist.asp?AID=235858&T=9372



here's the lyrics

Practically impractical/
Not adaptable/
Its problematical/
Why this when/
We seemed so compatible/
Seemed magical/
Hardly laughable/
Hatefully tactical/
In all Capitals/
We had it all/
Not even remotely sustainable/
Ample artiries punctures seems emotionally fatal/
Examples through my artistry made it debatable/
Inseparable? I never knew you were capable of being this hateful/
Baffled I stagger passed here blinded by lager and pain/
Harvested disdain put that look on her face/
Passions paraplegic, strategic attempts to maintain sane/
Tears shed, wounds heal, but memories always stay in place/
Thoughts of our bodies in motions of oceans filled the atmosphere/
I’m glad your hear I replied in fear/You disappeared/
It was a hallucinated wave of you near/
But felt so sincere/


Exhausted I drone questioning the truth/
Realizing I’m being irrational examining our love from the roots/
In our youth years through many new years our feelings were taboo/
Never pursued our dreams to be subdued over the few/
Sickened like never before/
Seemed so simplistic but holds so much more/
Battered, torn, forlorn, I mourn/
Scorned, no warmth or worth, Resentment is reborn/
Kindle, Nimble, brittle, personally belittled to no extent/
Swindled at my expense/
Tense between tear duct relief, I moan and wince/
Fenced in an addiction that you’re suddenly against/


I must trust in eternal strength/
Vital information left indistinct/
Left indistinct!

Emotional paralysis made it inevitable I couldn’t stand again/

I can feel your desire inside/
I will not be denied /
This is not only my life/
ITS also yours/
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Old 01-25-04, 07:16 PM   #2
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this beat is irritating...the vocals need to be turned up big time..

sorry that really sums it up...sorry i dont have more ot say, i know hoe dissapointing it is to get 2 line replys
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Old 01-25-04, 08:44 PM   #3
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Yeah my vocals always need to change in volume it seems like
and i like the beat alot
huh?
oh well thanks though
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Old 01-27-04, 09:42 AM   #4
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let me gets some feed back folks,
This is the most bogus site,
Every where i go to promote my music they like it except for here?
Jealous muthafuckers or something.
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Old 01-27-04, 09:50 AM   #5
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i agree, beat is annnnnoying... production is ok i guess, 'cept quality... lyrics i guess are ok..nothing special , kinda deep, i like your style...

i uno... peace
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