Phenom | Kingz | Dabatos | TonySelf | Tha Q | Half Breed | Tito | 7th End | RV Radio |
01-16-07, 02:31 PM | #1 | ||||||
Whys That?
|
West Auckland
IP: DAD1 8D50
http://www.myspace.com/7thendproductions
Produced by shadowsville. West Aucklands were Im at, so alot a the lyrics relate to local ish, so yeh, some of it might not add up. Drop links and ill hit them up. 1 |
||||||
01-16-07, 02:32 PM | #2 | ||||||
Whys That?
|
IP: DAD1 8D50
|
||||||
01-16-07, 03:16 PM | #3 | ||||||
Flyweight
|
IP: 2DA9 8083
ok ok...beat is crazy........
id say turn up the vocals a bit, lovin the emotion on this and the energy, good flow ur hangin with it well..... like the chorus......really ridin the beat 2nd verse....got a lil versatile...more of a twista flow now, u changed it from fast and slowed it a lil, likes overall id say my only thing with this is turn up the vocals, i know ur usin a comp mic, but ur makin it work, it aint that bad u just gotta turn it up cuz the bass from the beat is kinda absorbin ur verses thumbs up |
||||||
01-17-07, 03:39 PM | #4 | ||||||
Whys That?
|
IP: DAD1 8D50
Thanks for the feed. will get at one a your tracks soon.
|
||||||
01-17-07, 04:16 PM | #5 | ||||
Still Sick
|
IP: 2143 04F1
damn
you was flowin yo ass off
__________________
R.I.P. Bodie Pay Homage To The Best
If you think you better than holla! |
||||
01-20-07, 03:39 AM | #6 | ||||||
Whys That?
|
IP: 4B65 810A
up .
|
||||||
01-20-07, 06:44 PM | #7 | |||||||
DaTrus Is A Bitch!
|
IP: 8B01 C1C9
Beat, is a little diffrent..feeling it.
Chorus is decent.. First verse, has a real nice flow and the lyrics are good.. Chorus again.. Second verse, has a little slower flow than first, but it still fits and sounds good, sketchy at a point.. The first verse on this was real nice, and it definitly stuck out. Good creativity with the flow and chorus... Nice drop fam |
|||||||
01-21-07, 09:44 AM | #8 | |||||||
I'm Talented.Period.
|
IP: 40C2 F668
ok...fast tongue type beat...let's see if u come with that...
ok...ur tryin to...ur presence is real weak on this track...like too dry...u def shud dub ur vocals... ur flow is decent...but this beat can be murdered...All u did was slap it the hook was interesting in its delivery...but needed some ad libs in the dead spots ambitious track...but lacked polish |
|||||||
01-22-07, 09:49 PM | #9 | |||||
The Paragraph President
|
IP: 2372 BC06
word nice beat, shadowville yup. Your quality def sounds better, i dont know what you did but word it's coo. I'm feelin ya hook a lot man, very catchy but you should added some adlibs or gave it some coo ecko effect or somin. Your flow is pretty good man, most of it is on lock. But I'm havin troubles understand some the words you sayin in some parts of your verses, for the most part it's good but just a few lines you know. Maybe you flowin it a little to fast in them parts im not sure but just work that out next time. I'm def feelin this track probably your best I've heard yet man nice drop.
rtf here: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=239248
__________________
|
|||||
01-23-07, 04:11 PM | #10 | |||||||
El Padrino
|
IP: 90A6 BE8B
This joint got its debut on air Sunday night 1/21/07 over the Conspiracy airwaves on the OYD radio show
-Don Tito Bronsky
__________________
Full Metal Bronsky Dropin 1st Quarter 08' |
|||||||
01-23-07, 05:53 PM | #11 | ||||||
Whys That?
|
IP: 1BF0 D10A
yeh thanks for that, now how abouts some feed?
|
||||||
01-26-07, 05:51 PM | #12 | ||||||
why so serious!!??
|
IP: 2020 96DE
and u call me wack??
__________________
|
||||||
01-28-07, 02:13 AM | #13 | ||||||
Whys That?
|
IP: 1BF0 D10A
up .
|
||||||
Thread Tools | Search this Thread |
Display Modes | |
|
|