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XxToXiCXxVeRbZ 5 100.00%
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Old 04-25-04, 10:14 PM   #1
XxToXiCXxVeRbZ
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From: newyork/B.X
Post Profinik VS XxToXiCXxVeRbZ

IP: 3240 794D

U Said U Wanted To Battel
No D/r Votes
No Unexplain Votes


U Spit 1st Nigga
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Old 04-26-04, 09:36 PM   #2
Profinik
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aight herez my verse...

Here there'z alot of good emcees and you ain't one...
Fo' thiz pussy nigga I don't even need tha gun...
My niggaz goin to "Ante Up" As I "Clap Thiz Fool"...
Don't worry I got that "Tool"...
You don't even have to talk bac bitch jus listen...
I'll quickly give ya the "Black Death" you be wishin...
Keep talkin' shit n some body parts will be missin...
I ain't your momma who you think ya dissin...
connect bulletz to ya body like "Connect Four"...
Looke everyone im battlin' "Daddy'z lil whore"...
Tha way your gonna be famous is by ridin' R.Kelly...(Fuckin' Faggot)
I would have so many black people surroundin' ya body,itz like tha remake of "Belly"...
Tha only "Factor" ya got against me iz "Fear"...
You'll get "Cut Down" quicker than a "Mower" from "John Deer"...
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Old 04-29-04, 08:08 PM   #3
XxToXiCXxVeRbZ
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From: newyork/B.X
IP: C1DA C961

Aight Dats Hot Bout To Drop Mines// Lets Go// Here We Go
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Old 05-03-04, 11:42 PM   #4
XxToXiCXxVeRbZ
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ima spit-wit-da-sic-shyt-dat-will-connect-ya-wrist/but gats-n-macks-2-backs-infact-even-let-da-bats-clap-ya-lips/let my blades-shave-away-n-play-n-let-Aks-display/how tips-hit-lips-n-twist-ya-frame-its-no-game-how-this-play/put slugs-2-ya-frame-n-brain-you-can't-hang-wit-dis-dame/got knives-dat-slice-wives-n-dice-lives-cut-any-slut-i-will-slaughter-ya-fame/yo ima spill-brains-n-refill-n-keep-steel-craniums-i-peel/leave shots-curvin-n-turnin-leavin-nuthin ajournin bodies twistin like windmills/...
Switch it Back!! U couldn't bring illness, if ur rhyme had infected-rats, lets see how u hold a mic with ur arms-twisted-back


i'll fracture ya physics..don't even need to pull guns, i just blast ya with lyrics..rip thru the dash of ya Civic..hit ya
throwback and ya fitted..
too sick// profinik u aint even ready fo dis// make yo testicles look like a bowl of spinach// its green becuz u got injected with lyrical disease//
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Old 05-03-04, 11:44 PM   #5
XxToXiCXxVeRbZ
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vote vote vote uppin uppin// lets go people// uppinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn
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Old 05-04-04, 12:03 AM   #6
puertoricanelly
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Toxic killed in this battle. yo style was hott

profinic your a nub and have a lot of elevatin to do. i suggest battlin Newbies cuz your flow was herbish,,Toxic had more experience on you

Keep Elevatin !!!!

Vote= Toxic


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Old 05-04-04, 12:25 AM   #7
DeaDly RhymeZ 01
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DAMN Toxic u Realy Ripped it derr homie u got much better dats why u in da RESPECTA fo me na mien

Break down

Person who needs Elavatin

flow4/10
Rhymes 7/10
Opener4/10
Closer6/10
Structure5/10
21/50
XXTOXICXXVERBZ

Flow8/10
Rhymes 9/10
Multis 8/10
Opener 8/10
CLoser 6/10
39/50
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Old 05-04-04, 12:38 AM   #8
XxToXiCXxVeRbZ
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From: newyork/B.X
IP: 3240 794D

Uppinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn Lets Go Get Dis Shit Close People
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Old 05-04-04, 01:17 AM   #9
accomplishment
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From: Da Nasty North
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Ok

Profinik ok verse you know kinda of simple and basic but your flow was doofy diffrent sylable lines make your shit not rhyme... so you gotta work on that and work on your complexity of things aight 5/10

ok Toxic easy wit the-dash-between-everything-ya-feel-me... thats good that you droppa six line multi but i dont think they were needed it made it harder to read... but that was basically the only downfall of your verse good punches and good MULTIS and flow for sure... hot shit be 8/10

vote toxic
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Old 05-04-04, 04:50 PM   #10
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profinik - aight ur verse was horrible...u had stretched lines....nothing made sense....no punches....horrible flow....bad wordplay......go to tutorials.....

toxic - u need ta fix ya structure....its too hard to read....but u actually threw punches....but seriously dont use that structure....but u win cuz u had punches...

vote - toxic
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Old 05-05-04, 04:43 PM   #11
A$e
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From: K-Town
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ok, without a shout of a doubt dat toxic won dis shit, better punches n whatever, n yes chill out da wit da -'s, n i swear i heard dis "let's see if u can hold da mic wit ya arms twisted back?" dat sounds mighty familar, profinik, umm, jus elevate ya flow, i'm not hatin or anything, no dickridin. But everytime u battle u'll get better.....TRUST ME ON DAT ONE!!!!!
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