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Old 08-19-04, 10:09 PM   #1
BrOTheRP.A.R.A.
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I’ll scare you away with my harder punchlines/
every time we battle you run away without a chance to shine/.
you diddent even get yer chance to spit yer line/
and people said i shot you up like i was the fastest nine/.
you think yer guns are blazin well let me tell you somethin you aint amazin/
i caught you starying at me cuz of the way i was phrasen/.
i made you roll up like a tiny raisen cuz of the way i was phrasen/
dont let me catch you glazen that takes it off topic you crack feind dazen/.
my hard punchlines will make you sqeual cuz you kno im for real/
so now you kno my shits the real muh fucken deal/.
my puches are crazy cuz i burned you down like i was some hot flames/
my power is like i was as strong as lebron james/.
you can call me mr punchlines cuz thats the way i go down/
you think you can shoot me up cuz im in yer town/.
i spit the truth so go ahead and put me in the booth/
cuz you kno that im the one thats still so youth/.
everytime you see me ill be in the booth spitin out harder nouns/
about you and who you hang out with cuz all yer freinds are clowns/.
you think yer the one that can hit it up and you think yer the shit/
but cant even fit into your own crew so im the one who will make you quit/.
so front me down ill be the first one to make you submit/
my punches make you run away as fast as a commit/.
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Old 08-19-04, 10:10 PM   #2
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i might be makin it longer not sure and ill be recording it probly when i got my stuff set
and the beat i went to with it is realest niggas
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Old 08-19-04, 11:18 PM   #3
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uppin lets get some realy feedback
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