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Old 09-10-08, 04:49 PM   #1
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Check out my poem for my intro to creative writing class b

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Old 09-10-08, 07:47 PM   #2
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you entered THAT in for a creative writing class?
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Old 09-10-08, 07:58 PM   #3
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The Kid

The kid is a raging volcano
The kid is the color red
Ever touch his car
Don’t be surprised if you wound up dead


^was my first choice, but didn't think it'd go over to well b.

but yo peep game, this is something you might think is ill. Yesterday, when I was taking the most incredible and amazing dump ever, right? I took out a marker, and scribbled "BOOGER" on the fucking stall wall!!! OMG!! The rush I felt was amazing b. Can I join your gang b? PLEASE?!?!?!
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Old 09-10-08, 08:01 PM   #4
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no.... your not worthy
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Old 09-10-08, 08:08 PM   #5
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aww, what'd I do wrong b? Was the bathroom stall not dangerous enough? I wanna be like the cool kids b. Running around coloring on everything. LEmme at em b!! Lemme at em!!!
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Old 09-10-08, 08:12 PM   #6
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you wanna get into my crew you gotta off someone..
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Old 09-11-08, 02:05 AM   #7
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you wanna get into my crew you gotta off someone..



baph...enough of the nonsense....drop an OM
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Old 09-11-08, 09:18 AM   #8
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baph...enough of the nonsense....drop an OM

i could open mic all night lad...

straight up,
check the mechanics of the mind
as im tackling the times with aptitude to rhyme
to baffle you & blind rapper dudes defined
as the wackest you can find
jus for practice & I'm trying to relax & doing fine
the baddest with a fat bag of bagdad to brew tonight
& damn my crew is tight cause i dont hang with stupid types
yo Im crashing through the mic with high magnitude to strike
any maggot who dispise with an antagonist disguise
theyll be catching a surprise when attacking my advice
is step back or you get sliced & smacked & uthanised
by my tactics & applied magic when i write
my narrative on life immaculate & right ontrack with it comprised
of real rap thats through the eyes of a captive.......to the vibe
with a practical devised actual reprise
to hack a fucking axe into the eyes of the masses of deprived
rappers whove arrived must be a fucking masochist inside
its fact that ill provide an embarrasing demise
to any faggot who decides to test the mavrick in his prime
can get splattered on the grav pit.....& battered into fine
fragments on a grind.. & thrown the fuck back into the line
as I & open up avenues supplying cash for moving rhymes
while hacking you with knives cause my stratigy is live
i aint a passenger i drive forward traveling the sky
morphing passeges to scribe so dramatic the devide
between your attitude and mine & my rhapsody combined
like an activist im dying to react to this decline
& vacuity of lyrical faculty & design
cats have apathy for rhyme bringing macabre in time
& if hip hop is dying, then im massivly inclined
to bring it back into the light.. & on track n moving right
to shine spectacular & bright .........................SIKE
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Old 09-10-08, 08:13 PM   #9
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give me a name b!! I take em out with no mercy!! Straight rape em to death!! Give em to me b! Give em to me!
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Old 09-10-08, 08:15 PM   #10
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you couldnt hurt a fly kiddo..
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Old 09-10-08, 08:16 PM   #11
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My wallets a better weapon than an atom bomb b! Let me at em!
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Old 09-10-08, 08:19 PM   #12
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nah your weak..
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Old 09-10-08, 08:23 PM   #13
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damn and just when i was gonna cop the whole crew a bunch of BMW 7 series. Bunch of haters b. BUNCH OF HATERS!! Don't be suprised when you burning that beer belly climbing up hills, then go up to tag a wall, and you see a tag that says, "THE KID WAS HERE". Ya feel me b? YA FEEL ME?
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Old 09-10-08, 09:30 PM   #14
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damn and just when i was gonna cop the whole crew a bunch of BMW 7 series. Bunch of haters b. BUNCH OF HATERS!! Don't be suprised when you burning that beer belly climbing up hills, then go up to tag a wall, and you see a tag that says, "THE KID WAS HERE". Ya feel me b? YA FEEL ME?

I feel you...i feel you kid
no homo tho
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Old 09-11-08, 09:10 AM   #15
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damn and just when i was gonna cop the whole crew a bunch of BMW 7 series. Bunch of haters b. BUNCH OF HATERS!! Don't be suprised when you burning that beer belly climbing up hills, then go up to tag a wall, and you see a tag that says, "THE KID WAS HERE". Ya feel me b? YA FEEL ME?

you know nothing of graffiti toy
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