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12-17-04, 01:42 PM | #1 | |||||||
New to RV
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Give me some feed back ya'll!!
IP: C3B8 0828
Keepin It Street
S-A-G- To the T-O-W-N/ Sagtown is my hood and i'll say it again/ rollin down hazelwood smokin out like cheech and chong/ bumpin sum of that tupac takin hits from the bong/ high as hell, up in saginaw/ any bitch will crawl/ all these fake g's will fall/ if they try to cross me/ i'ma crazy ass white boy, i settle the beef/ i'll creep up yo street with that gat in my hand/ dump a few clips thats always the plan/ cause i'm runnin with the 989/ i'll do the crime, but nevah pay the time/ rules don't exist/ the cops roll up i evaporate with the mist/ pigs can't touch this/ so up in this town/ don't be a clown/ you act up here/ motha fuker you dissapear/ chorus: cause in sagnasty we be keepin it street/ from the day to the night we be cockin the heat/ from start to the end we be rippin up beats/ cause sagnasty is the place to be/ we be slangin, bangin, and keepin it street/ from the day to the night we be cockin the heat/ from start to the end we be rippin up beats/ Gta is the way we rollin/ cops patrollin our blocks cause our rides are stollin/ its gettin deeper every minute/ i can't escape all the sinnin/ peeps grinnin at the sight of they people gettin shot/ next day they ovah shootin up anotha block/ its crazy all the murdah and the beefin/ all i can hear is gunshots when i'm sposed to be sleepin/ so i jump out my window and start creepin/ i started doin b&e's at the age of seven/ by the time i was thirteen i robbed the seven-eleven/ me and my boy kevin broke inside the skool/ then we got rolled and i ran like i fool/ they charged me B&E and fleeing & Eluding/, plus assault to a police officer for tryin to boot him/ i was crazy as an adolescent/ but soon i learned my leason/ i graduated to toatin pistols/ had a fist ful of bullets for any body poppin they jaws/ i'll finish it later my class jus got over |
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12-17-04, 01:46 PM | #2 | |||||||
King of Honolulu
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IP: 9A07 1297
this wasn't very good.
Your structure needs definate work... but you had okay vocab etc. you will get better just keep on keepin' on nam'sayin'? 3.5/10
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